Mental Menstration(men)

blood sports of the brain pan (blood lust)

Kind mouthed, Mr or Ms advertisable, with that "ain't I so nice?" toothy smile

Bleeding personality all over me and my padded cell

You write and you read to me constantly

Menstrually related just about every time

Resident conjugal visitor

Mental w***e and moral abandoner.....

I deserve you all over

Repeatedly with great vigor

Your blood and your lust

Constantly all over me

Damn

Menstruation disorders

Writers under command

"The orders" that come from flesh

(you cannot ignore me!!!)

Our lovely state of dysphoria!

Shedding layers upon layers

Writing of walls

Painting bloody periods and  semi colons

It usually get's pretty f*****g ugly

And the stink of it...!! ugh the stink of it all

Of your mental menstration bloodsports

I think I'm quite sure that I don't like that one the most

Makes the room f*****g stink

Every time you f**k or write to me; in desperation or love

(f**k's the difference?)

Mr, maybe, Ms politely full of spite and c**t judgements

You're not a person to me as I am not one to you

Just a stinking set of expectations

Menstruating almost always.... pregnant mostly never

It's time we try harder so we can die faster

Start a family, buy a dog... make some porn

We got time, it pays the same...

Overtime's erection

Triple time's borderline orgy

Things take their turn.

Same thing in the end.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Kirsty Woodward]

"Every time you f**k or write to me; in desperation or love
(f**k's the difference?)"

I don't really have a review for you Hans. This line stands out to me the most. There's a very fine line between love, hate & desperation (in my opinion). I felt some different emotions throughout this entire piece. You're unique, as always.

[Davidgeo]

Hate f*****g is a real thing.

[freemantle]

Unsavoury crap, remove it at once.

[Davidgeo]

I wonder which "friend" you are?

[Not here]

you definitely know how to catch people with the titles of your poems. I especially enjoyed this one. cant really add anything to what others have already said, but it's a great piece. my favorite lines were the last two.

[Davidgeo]

the last two were my favorite as well.

[Not here]

they were a very good way to wrap it all up

[fergul]

Glad you think so. most of the tossers on this site need a stick ramming up their arse to shake em out of their torpor.

Just posted my first, hope you like it, not that I give a toss, at least not in public

[fergul]

Reads like a bit of a mad rant at first. It's interesting enough though for me to come back to it later and try and make some sense.

Like the menstration wordplay on the proper spelling of good old jamrag time.

fergul

[Davidgeo]

gross. that's gross

[Davidgeo]

funny though

[r. f. jordan]

i'm always riveted by your imagery, HansJizzy, this poem is no exception. you have an excellent view of what it is to relate fully to someone. this speaker seems to have a keen understanding of his subject in this poem. as if there is an insight that has just been reached, atop this insight within this poem itself. this poem's closing:

Start a family, buy a dog... make some porn

We got time, it pays the same...

Overtime's erection

Triple time's borderline orgy


Things take their turn.

Same thing in the end.

is excellent in that this speaker's apparent contemplation of this relation seems to turn to dust brushed off of his shoulders. excellent write HansJizzy. there is a sharpness to your voice that i deeply admire. please keep it coming with your contributions to this site.