How Deep My Dear?

so what if henry every is my idol?

the girdle girl

my dick in hand

and a job for the quartermaster

by my captain I lie to protect

until we come or at least

 a new disaster

they pay us bits to scout bliss tits 

they make reason fore warned making

able bodies explain cum dumpsters

obtained to be sold

for able men who come accross on wages

crossing right hooks with the dirty cooks

fighting merciless c***s killing accross spectrum

 

those frayed lines of absorption

my dear friends?

i just can't say...

My ear's for abstraction

i play to come

it's fine attraction

to see you die

so vigorously

for common place

just watch tv

Author's Note

yeah... I meant cooks... you think I mean crooks? Guilty

Reviews

[K. Harding]

You have an old fashioned familiarity to your writing which is what I believe keeps today's poetry alive and well. I know many on this site do not like you because of your "arrogance" but I admire you for your honesty. Poems about false notions of suicide penned by a teenagers cry for attention will get lost in inferiority to great poets like Keats and Poe, whose poems will outlast us all. It is also refreshing to see someone who knows a thing or two. Sweet opening line about Henry Avery being your idol that outlines the base theme of this poem. Pirates. I think the lack of punctuation in this helps the poems fluidity and the occasional rhyme, but not too many to make it too clichéd or overbearing. "to see you die so vigorously". Dark ending but a perfect twist to fit the end of the poem. Nice work. I like your style.

[Davidgeo]

Come aboard lass... you can be me anne bony

Eh, I'm not so bad... or is it? I'm as expressive as anyone, isn't that what we strive for? To emote... one way or another? Sometimes the porn has to be taboo.

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Cum dumpsters lol. and again I say, twisted, oh the excitement.

[Davidgeo]

Pirates are always a good time, even if I'm not always talking about pirates when I'm talking about pirates... Henry Avery was the only notorious m**********r to get out alive and retire with a relative fortune. Everyone else got killed... and all the good ones got a good public hanging and a corpse on display.

[TL Boehm]

for commonplace just watch TV. Aint that the truth - well its not the truth if its TV but you get the gist. The Henry's were a lot weren't they?

[Davidgeo]

we're all pirates Boehm.. (boheim).

every word is booty every concept a prize of plunder.