Takes Pretty Easy To Hurt

Takes Pretty Easy To Hurt

A Poem by Davidgeo
"

You're just so pretty in that thin skin of ours

"

I swore I was going to make it like rain drops

Like  a real writer would write about, things

But that's just an abstract

And I came to bring the pain

So sorry

But what if I wasn't a writer but you were an under stander

It's not that, some prefer the tender sociopath's

Perspective

Just ask me

And "it" would speak

I swore I was going to make it like satin sheets

Attach lover's weight

Pin a name to that feeling 

That first time you came

Warmth down your leg

Do you feel that anymore?

Shut your mouth... I'm not here for liar's remorse...

I am the liar's remorse

I once pitied myself

She asked me "why cry for a bald girl?"

It's why we don't talk now

It was a stupid f*****g question

Without scars, but pleasantly... a fair replacement.

I am nothing without my replacements.

We are nothing but replacements

F**k faces

I'm sorry I swore.  F**k you.

(the line forms to the right dear)

© 2016 Davidgeo


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Davidgeo

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Morning Cheese dong.

Had a bit of time on my hands so I thought I'd have a scroll through your stuff. Got to fifty and guess how many non troll reviews you've had, 43 in all, (wow! 0.86 of a review per scribble on average,) and that includes some
so-called writers who are probably fake profiles created by you.
Reality check time Jizzy, no-one is interested, got it! so it's time to head for the hills, because this isn't getting you anywhere.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Couple questions for you: Do you think you are some kind of special snowflake when you are mean or sassy to everyone in this website? Is it funny to f**k around here wanting to get low rating for yourself and calling this place fake? Am I missing something or are you just some jobless person or a kid messing around?

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Morning Cheese dong.

Had a bit of time on my hands so I thought I'd have a scroll through your stuff. Got to fifty and guess how many non troll reviews you've had, 43 in all, (wow! 0.86 of a review per scribble on average,) and that includes some
so-called writers who are probably fake profiles created by you.
Reality check time Jizzy, no-one is interested, got it! so it's time to head for the hills, because this isn't getting you anywhere.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Morning Cheese dong.

Had a bit of time on my hands so I thought I'd have a scroll through your stuff. Got to fifty and guess how many non troll reviews you've had, 43 in all, (wow! 0.86 of a review per scribble on average,) and that includes some
so-called writers who are probably fake profiles created by you.
Reality check time Jizzy, no-one is interested, got it! so it's time to head for the hills, because this isn't getting you anywhere.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 8, 2016
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Davidgeo

Johnsburg, IL



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