Run Bloody Over White

Reminds me of roses on ice with champagne... romantics are underrated.

I'm not really too broken... but I know back pain. Sciatica and the like.  I had some misfortune while I served, nothing crushing, I can walk.  It's miserable when your core is debilitated though, the back is a b***h.  Ugh. When it hurts to sit and lie down the meaning of life is degraded just a bit.
 
But pain is purifying and hell can wait.
 
I always sound like an a*****e when I talk about hell... I'm an atheist, it just doesn't jibe.
 
Even still, pain is purifying and if there is a hell, I'll see you there.  Let the falls run bloody over white.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Elise Anton]

"I'm not really too broken... but I know back pain."

I'm not really too broken either but I did get slammed in the back by two cars failing to stop in time. Pain sure is purifying, thank you for reminding me, I tend to curse its presence quite a lot instead...

Yes the meaning of life is degraded when you're curled up in a ball whimpering... There are moments though - this may count as one of them - when life, despite any amount of pain, is preferable to no life at all.

Ah... Springstein... he knows all the right words!

Baby doll.

[Sangeetha]

Wow this is really painful and yet humorous piece an odd combination but you make it work I loved it very much full ratings!!

[Not here]

while you served? like army or what?

[Davidgeo]

like.... none of you're business... at all. You get what I write that's all. We ain't friends.

[Larry John]

"But pain is purifying and hell can wait." Now this is poetry.

[Davidgeo]

I certainly thought so. Nice name by the way.

[thecavaliar]

Morning Cheese dong.

Had a bit of time on my hands so I thought I'd have a scroll through your stuff. Got to fifty and guess how many non troll reviews you've had, 43 in all, (wow! 0.86 of a review per scribble on average,) and that includes some
so-called writers who are probably fake profiles created by you.
Reality check time Jizzy, no-one is interested, got it! so it's time to head for the hills, because this isn't getting you anywhere.

[thecavaliar]

I love the way you thrash around in the dark. Ron Parrish? Who next, you ain't even close.

Crush away sweet cheeks.

[Davidgeo]

Crush away sweet cheeks? What does that mean? I don't what that means. You need to elaborate, I'm not from Nazi Germany like you.

[Davidgeo]

ahahah Bam.... Goodwin's law in effect... before lunchtime even! I'm obviously Jesus F*****g Christ.

[thecavaliar]

Perhaps this will stimulate you amoebic intellect instead.

Dear Panther footed, summer eyed,
Oh yes, I have scorned your numbered scales,
truths' a rise of sea, a fall of earth,
up tumbler! Boreas capped,
stygian based that even Clio climbing there
apes Sisyphus.

I could go on, but I thought I'd give you a while to work it out.

G'night.

[Davidgeo]

My friend you can't hurt me the way that you think you can. I know who you are Ron Parrish, I am so very much more than you. I wish you the best dear boy. You are clearly outmatched yet you chose to pursue,,, eh,,, good luck buddy boy, It get's harder from here... lies do dissolve, then where will you stand? Ron.... it's gonna get worse, I don't care about your feelings. I'm going to crush you.

[Not here]

why dont i have a nickname yet? come on man

[Davidgeo]

cause ur dumb

[Not here]

oh. fair enough

[thecavaliar]

Well, I've just wrote a poem, especially for you. Better it if you can.

[thecavaliar]

You only get read out of pity. You have absolutely no talent and you know it!

[Davidgeo]

Pish posh pretty lady... let's you and I have a write off.... what do ya say little buddy?!!?

[thecavaliar]

Looks like you mostly are talking to yourself Jizzboy. Most folk here have got your number.

[Davidgeo]

Do they? Seems I still get read somehow. Sometimes self reflection can mean more than petty spite. Perhaps you should discuss this with someone.... thanks for the review honey bear... it's always a pleasure (son)