Bombs Away

Bombs Away

A Poem by Davidgeo
"

We are the sun we own the moon

"

They stand in line with me


Beside me always I'm beside you


There is not a front to this line


Battlefield drawn boxed in the sand


Turn after turn we swim with your hands


I am the one! says every man on


I am the one, bombs away, and away


Do you have my religion?

Do you have what it takes?


To swim with all manner of man


You'll disolve into aether


Changing the minds with a million crimes


God can't even justify me and god still waits

For my apology

But instead, all for him, I keep filling out this eulogy


Of hot shots and dead babies

Shattered lands and broken dreams

Entire generations enslaved at the whim of a shapeless tyrant

    Called ignorance

  Called delusion so vile, called ubiqutious

Called denial, called sky kindgom... called deferred life

For my perpetual strife I drown in everything you lack


From a position of power I won't run from you


No man achieved the moon without coming after the sun

And I will be the son of God, of myself I am the one

The one who never runs, we got a religion

Called you aint right

Here comes my Sons motha fuckers!

We burn! WE burn all! we all will... BURN!

It's together mother f****r, that we become the Sun

© 2016 Davidgeo


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Powerful and true words.
"Of hot shots and dead babies
Shattered lands and broken dreams
Entire generations enslaved at the whim of a shapeless tyrant
Called ignorance
Called delusion so vile, called ubiqutious
Called denial, called sky kindgom... called deferred life
For my perpetual strife I drown in everything you lack"
I went to Africa for President Clinton. Medical and water/food teams to save a few. No-one cared about the dead babies. Today babies dying in Flint. World had never changed. Rich man seeking more wealth and forgetting the enslaved workers working for bare minimum. Hell will be filled with greedy men and foolish leaders. You made your point. A outstanding poem. Need to be posted in more places.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

8 Years Ago

Thank you. I do appreciate you taking the time.
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

You are welcome.



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I keep filling out this eulogy

Of hot shots and dead babies
Shattered lands and broken dreams
Entire generations enslaved at the whim of a shapeless tyrant
Called ignorance

Stellar lines here. I am drawn to a poem capable of a gut punch and this one does just that. Shallow water is more deadly than the abyss.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TL Boehm

8 Years Ago

I've never considered myself dangerous. I have some opportunistic coyote tendencies and residual Vik.. read more
TL Boehm

8 Years Ago

Continued - in the shallows before they have opportunity to molt into something that could eat me? N.. read more
Davidgeo

8 Years Ago

If you must
Plenty of room in heaven then, doesn't everyone. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

8 Years Ago

Don't fill your trousers on my account now baby doll...

I don't think we deserve to be here. God will punish us all in the end.

Posted 8 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

8 Years Ago

You are going to hell because you masturbate.
A power write on how man has progressed!!!!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

8 Years Ago

Though, we are climbing mountains these days... however you want to take that.
andrew mitchell

8 Years Ago

I was being sarcastic on man's progress, we are such a destructive race! like amazon ants!
Davidgeo

8 Years Ago

No, no, no sir.... you reference the great Bullet Ant if you want to get all ant violent with it. .. read more
I care, just can't be bothered any longer to do anything about it.

How about you, eve done anything about anything, or do you just spout s**t?

Posted 8 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

8 Years Ago

Awww.... he's mad. Ha. I've done my far share of things... I'm doing something right now by writin.. read more
Davidgeo

8 Years Ago

Oh yeah, I forgot to call you 'son'...... I like to condescend people too. Bob.
The world is what we've made it son.



Posted 8 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

8 Years Ago

" The world is what we've made it son. " - you still aren't understand what I'm saying but that's ok.. read more
Folk are fond of saying it's a fucked up world; I say, nothing wrong with the world, it's just the way we f**k with it.

Anyway, only another thirty or so years to go, (mean averages and all that,) and my a*s is grass, so who gives a s**t.



Posted 8 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

8 Years Ago

We are the world, we are not separate from it.

Witty but ultimately meaningless.... b.. read more
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Posted 8 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I've got time a plenty, all you've gotta do is stop being an a*****e to decent folk on this site.

Donald Trump huh, only in America...

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

8 Years Ago

hhahahahhah.... you think I hate what you're doing? Ha... this is exactly what I'm here for John.<.. read more
Davidgeo

8 Years Ago

Well, you and your buddies and that little clique of disposable teenagers you idiots infect into doi.. read more
Davidgeo

8 Years Ago

I don't even mind telling you directly as this point... you freaks cannot help yourselves... you wi.. read more

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Added on February 21, 2016
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