Through the eyes of a simpleton, I see greatness. But who am I to see anything? To say I like it? I read it ten times over and every time I smiled? Every time, I shifted focus to a new word and I examined it as solitary, as something I wish I could have pronounced, announced... written? Who am I to say I saw complexity in the simple words and logic between the parentheses? What am I even talking about? I have to publicly admit to liking something so much I wish my fingers had struck those keys instead of yours?
You'll bite my head off, call me a bunch of stuff full of self-righteousness. It won't matter though because I read it and I lost and I found some of myself inside it. Any forthcoming judgement of my facile opinion will be worth it. So, thank you. If you hadn't called me simple I may never have read this. I would have missed out on the losing and the finding, see?
I like it. A lot. It's beautiful. There, I said it.
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
It is a pretty thing I think; nothing very dark or profane found it's way in (I don't always have co.. read moreIt is a pretty thing I think; nothing very dark or profane found it's way in (I don't always have control of that, many things go unpublished because of it). Just think of all the stuff I spew that you didn't wish you wrote, it'll balance that unwelcomed envy right quick.
Haha nice comeback, was thinking the same thing myself. Everything balances out in the end. Or not. .. read moreHaha nice comeback, was thinking the same thing myself. Everything balances out in the end. Or not. I haven't seen enough stuff yet to make a resonably balanced equation, plus the envy is not unwelcomed from my end. Is it from yours?
8 Years Ago
No, it won't balance... the more you read the better I get. Ha.
Not unwelcomed, my e.. read moreNo, it won't balance... the more you read the better I get. Ha.
Not unwelcomed, my ego is huge - praise is like crack to me.... though, you might want to raise your standard of envy; they say I'm not to be trusted that I'm a bad fellow. It's never good to envy the devil in public.
I enjoy this one better than the last one I read. Like I said you have so much potential. You really do have a way with words, I just wish that you would put down your person and let the real you shine through, believe me I can spot flasehood from a mile away. It's like the berlin wall, gotta come down sometime. Like I said though I like this one better, you;re interesting to say the least. The least.
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 2 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
".. I just wish that you would put down your person and let the real you shine ."
Ha!.. read more".. I just wish that you would put down your person and let the real you shine ."
Ha! After two poems? You couldn't possible qualify that statement in reality... if you think you can, that's because you do not live in reality. A decent trolling attempt but you should leave that to me, you just come off as pretentious and shallow. With a little a dash of ignorant narcissism to boot. Yeah, I can spot bullshit too... even better than you...
Through the eyes of a simpleton, I see greatness. But who am I to see anything? To say I like it? I read it ten times over and every time I smiled? Every time, I shifted focus to a new word and I examined it as solitary, as something I wish I could have pronounced, announced... written? Who am I to say I saw complexity in the simple words and logic between the parentheses? What am I even talking about? I have to publicly admit to liking something so much I wish my fingers had struck those keys instead of yours?
You'll bite my head off, call me a bunch of stuff full of self-righteousness. It won't matter though because I read it and I lost and I found some of myself inside it. Any forthcoming judgement of my facile opinion will be worth it. So, thank you. If you hadn't called me simple I may never have read this. I would have missed out on the losing and the finding, see?
I like it. A lot. It's beautiful. There, I said it.
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
It is a pretty thing I think; nothing very dark or profane found it's way in (I don't always have co.. read moreIt is a pretty thing I think; nothing very dark or profane found it's way in (I don't always have control of that, many things go unpublished because of it). Just think of all the stuff I spew that you didn't wish you wrote, it'll balance that unwelcomed envy right quick.
Haha nice comeback, was thinking the same thing myself. Everything balances out in the end. Or not. .. read moreHaha nice comeback, was thinking the same thing myself. Everything balances out in the end. Or not. I haven't seen enough stuff yet to make a resonably balanced equation, plus the envy is not unwelcomed from my end. Is it from yours?
8 Years Ago
No, it won't balance... the more you read the better I get. Ha.
Not unwelcomed, my e.. read moreNo, it won't balance... the more you read the better I get. Ha.
Not unwelcomed, my ego is huge - praise is like crack to me.... though, you might want to raise your standard of envy; they say I'm not to be trusted that I'm a bad fellow. It's never good to envy the devil in public.
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