Killer Eaters

Killer eater doesn't kill or eat for filet

Flank or strip

But no one better

Killer eater knows the taste of filet

Flank and strip

All at once and all for keeps

Killer eater dines for life

As the sweetest cuts from the finest flesh

Are still alive and no one hunts them better

To know the hunt and taste the flesh

On life we dine for life we do

The killer eater's pure divinity in innocence

Limitless in it's ignorance

Killed and eaten by the magnificence

Of a civilized people

The murdering consumers of all innocence

Reviews

[brianborgan]

What a load of shite! Don't know why I bothered reading it.

[Davidgeo]

Neither do I, you clearly aren't a fan of bowling. That review was not at all hypocritical.... Are you John Alexander McFayden? He's supposed to be the guy who says "c**t" all the time and,, well, you say c**t all the time... therefore - you are probably John McFayden... Is that your profile name or do you go by something else here? I'd like to read your work.

[Terpsichore]

You really are a most unpleasant foulmouthed individual. But I think I'll keep reading the rubbish you spout, it amuses me.

I expect you'll get bored soon enough and piss off.

Kind regards.

T

[Terpsichore]

Fair enough. Apologise if what I said pissed you off, it wasn't meant to, I simply read the poem and took a meaning from it.

T

[Davidgeo]

Apologizing for s**t like that is for p*****s. Own what you say, who gives a s**t if I don't like it?

[Terpsichore]

Often it's difficult to get right into the mind of the writer, but I got the drift.

Like I said, the takers keep taking. If that isn't eating for comfort rather than survival I don't know what is.

T

[Davidgeo]

You can put your own meaning to it, I don't give it s**t. But I'm not going to confirm something false to help you're silly little review ego feel worthwhile. You got it wrong, who cares? Now get lost, you have proved to be the sort I detest on this site. You don't need to whine and cry and b***h about anything I'm saying, just don't say dumb s**t and you can keep your ego intact.

[Davidgeo]

Try getting inside your own mind when you read people... these words on the page are not meant for you to know in the writers specific context, it's for you and your context. Why does everyone on this site seem to miss that simple fact? None of you are very good so why try and "get inside the mind of the writer"? You'll just get lost and internalize stupid s**t.

[ANTO]

Boiled S**t.
Bull s**t
Boys s**t
Bouyed s**t
hmmm

[Davidgeo]

I don't get it? DId you just want to say some swear words? Flail your ineffectual fists around for a while? It's cute, I just don't get why you keep doing it.

[ANTO]

Coz its cute - you said it yourself

[Davidgeo]

Well, good to see you're still pathetic. Gotta pick the kids up so I have to say goodbye again... I'm sure you have all kinds of wonderful things planned tonight. Alone. With maybe that dog in your picture? It's so sad how transparent you are. Remember, if you think you might hurt yourself call your local emergency room and if you have a car don't drive it drunk. Okay? Cheer up bud, tomorrow can be a better day for you.

[ANTO]

you do what with kids ?
love ya byeeee bestie

[Terpsichore]

Takers versus givers; so far the takers are winning and I'm not holding my breath for a sudden reversal of mankind's fortunes.

Good stuff!

T

[Davidgeo]

No. This is about why murder for survival is just and murder for comfort is not.

[RibhyMay]

Very chilling. My sort of poem. Nice one mate.

[Davidgeo]

Chilling like Arnold in the worst Batman movie of all time? Be vicous, be nice, overall be clever. Reviews are not meant to be one sentence-eeeeee.... Like it or not, do it genuinely or please silently, shut the f**k up

[Amber Lily]

Wow, I love the darkness to this one. Reminds of Jack the ripper. Good work :)

[Davidgeo]

Reviews are not meant to be one sentence-eeeeee.... Like it or not, do it genuinely or please silently, shut the f**k up