Do You Kid? Can You Laughter?

Do You Kid? Can You Laughter?

A Poem by Davidgeo
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bright eyes on a cancer patient/ the suicidal millionaire

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It's a joke right the reason for the season the rhyme behind the time the decay death f*****g disaster murder the rape putrefying of innocence you look at me and manufacture belly laughter amid all this blood cum and raw disaster you piece of s**t you bloody b***h here we sit and we configure... and what is left.. we will occupy our time with; until tomorrow, because rent don't pay itself mother f****r....   kill kill die die... comfort? well... someone's gotta cry 

© 2016 Davidgeo


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Morning Cheese dong.

Had a bit of time on my hands so I thought I'd have a scroll through your stuff. Got to fifty and guess how many non troll reviews you've had, 43 in all, (wow! 0.86 of a review per scribble on average,) and that includes some so-called writers who are probably fake profiles created by you.
Reality check time Jizzy, no-one is interested, got it! so it's time to head for the hills, because this isn't getting you anywhere.

Posted 8 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

8 Years Ago

You keep copy and pasting the same exact review.... laziness is not a good quality.
You spout such rubbish it's just laughable. Call this a poem, i call it the rantings of a seriously disturbed mind.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Davidgeo

8 Years Ago

And we know you are quite the authority on the rantings of a seriously disturbed mind...

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Good Verbal Diarrhea; a deranged mind in harangues that is devoid of beauty; a usage that's decadent, and leaves the reader in foolish imagination.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Davidgeo

8 Years Ago

Sure... why not?

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Added on February 16, 2016
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Davidgeo
Davidgeo

Johnsburg, IL



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