Her + Him

Her + Him

A Poem by MelissaMichelle
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about a guy that i used to like but liked another girl

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Sometimes I think everyone is on her side

Sometimes I think no one knows i'm alive

That guy I like likes her to much to even see me walkin' past

But then he smiles at me, oh there has to be a way to make this moment last

Oh wait he's only lookin at her

Chorus: She's so beauiful with her long blonde hair and pretty blue eyes

But does she know how much i cry at night

And does she know how much i've wrote his name next to mine

No she doesn't cause' she doesn't even know im alive

 

There he goes holdin' her hand thinkin' of a plan to get her to notice him

He doesnt see me standin' there

He only sees her smilin'

But does she know that inside im cryin'

No she doesnt even know im alive

Look at those two holdin hands

Walkin side by side

Wait maybe she does know im alive

Thinkin of a plan to get me out of her life

Cuz

Chorus 1x

© 2009 MelissaMichelle


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Sometimes I can't even see my own self in the mirror. Part of the whole plan I suppose, this break us down to build us back up stronger. When does that strong part come again?

Very nice Melissa. You just wrote a number one hit, that only plays in the back of the heavy hearts. Good piece.

Antonio


Posted 15 Years Ago


I can relate..beautiful words I should say... I love the chorus,
that part just really pulled at my heart. I could really hear a voice there...
great write...x.x.x.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Nice composition/lyrics you got there..
I wonder how your voice affect my ear..
when you actually sing those songs you make..

I hope one day you're nice enough to share...
Yes your voice, your words I want to hear..
Alas, sing me your songs and for you i'll bake a cake..

Posted 16 Years Ago


Sounds like another day in high school life, I would dare say that almost everyone that has went to high school has been through this, believe me life does get better, nice write.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Rings true to high school life!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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