Next Season

When we lose the one we love we often feel as if love will never enter our lives again....but eventually we find love or it finds us....

Next Season

Love wanders in for a season
leaving the traces
of the wind
upon our face

Sweet scents linger in the air
then they're gone
and all we're left with
is the memory

Until...next season


a poem by
Lisa Victoria
2006

Reviews

[Katho28]

wow.... this leaves a nice feeling... and I can almost feel the breeze blowing against my cheeks... the imagery you've developed in this poem is brilliant. really enjoyed :) and good to see the positive ending :)) Having felt already that true love is so hard to find (maybe impossible, at times), reading this poem gives me hope that perhaps one day, the "one" will come along. thank you for sharing this beautiful poem :)

[Lisa Victoria]

Thank you Kath for your kind review...
Glad you enjoyed:)

Lisa

[emmajoy]

Gentle, thoughtful, suitably brief .. and most of all, true.

[Lisa Victoria]

Thank you for your kind words:)

[Lydia Shutter]

Life is made up of seasons. If love leaves during one season, we will find it again in another. An uplifting view of things. Great imagery. Lydi**

[Lisa Victoria]

Thank you Lydi, sorry so late on the reply, but have been going through some personal things. Thanks again:)

[Coyote Poetry]

Like the old saying. "Always tomorrow." Life is like the seasons. If we are lucky. The season will be less hard on the mind and the body. I like the flow of thoughts and the hope in the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Lisa Victoria]

Thank you for your inspiring words...:)

[Coyote Poetry]

Always my pleasure to read your poetry.

[William J. Marsh]

Just perfect. Short, sweet but not at all simple. Love is indeed a complex part of intricate lives.

[Lisa Victoria]

Yes, it is....thank you for your kind words:)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Beautifully written poem with a great meaning.
Very different and unique write i like it :)
Great job keep writing :)

[Lisa Victoria]

Thank you Cimmy, your words inspire me:)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

glad they do :)
Your welcome :)

[Chris]

Soft spoken with the echo of a whisper.

[Lisa Victoria]

Thank you:)

[Me]

so very beautiful...and so true...love this hun :) x

[Lisa Victoria]

Thank you Raven:)

[Jack...]

This was beautiful. Extremely enchanting and filled with romance. I loved this. I should have invited you to join in our our Seasons collaboration as well.

[Lisa Victoria]

Well, thank you I appreciate your kind words:)

[Joyrider]

I believe every human being can relate to this.

[Lisa Victoria]

Thank you Shiggy:)

[Twisted Words (Tom)]

Very insightful little poem.

[Lisa Victoria]

Thank you:)