Mistaken Identity

I wrote this 1/9/09. When I typed this, it was amazing on how some of the words that flew to my mind were thought of and instead my fingers typed something different. Odd but true. You probably won't understand which is fine, I had to read it a few times

Mistaken Identity

Horrible feelings die upon my lips

Arose from the grave the sun shines in new age

I find myself upon screams of turmoil not yet known

You brought me into an era I have not found

 Era of pure destiny defined by my intricate grave of feelings

Concealed eternally in a world of bound

You held me in crisis without a reasonable explanation

A crisis unearned by me nonetheless

Achievement has broke my steadfast ground

Confessional wisdom preached from thy 

Nose tingles from the feel of a worn out kiss

 A bundle of breath forges its significant sign

As I’ve lurk before you without evidence of endangerment

Spurious sight tattered by moments of regretful insights

You held me properly without a touch of actions or your incredible works

I collide with mercy that quietly sings my suicide song

Shadowing me from left to right

Shocking thoughts formed inside my mind

Even at the worst possible times, mistaken identity can be a fortunate find

Author's Note

Comments/Criticism always appreciated!

Reviews

[Skelasoldier]

Very good work, keep it up