Don't let go

One of my favourite poems that I wrote ...9/28/07

 

Don't ever let go

 

Of what you hold

 

Let it flow

 

With the steady rhythm of beat

 

Clap your hands

 

Tap your toes

 

Do anything

 

To keep your flow

 

Inside or out

 

Let it Absorb

 

Or let it release

 

Don't let yourself get beat

 

Strive for the win

 

Never struggle to fail

 

Hold your breath

 

As you plunge in deep

 

Struggle to stay alive

 

As you fight the waves

 

That keep pushing you back

 

Help yourself

 

Make a breakthrough

 

Don't let yourself be held back

 

As you broke the waves

 

You never let go

 

Keeping a strive

 

To fight

 

For your

 

Life

 

For your own sake

 

Don't let your spirit die

 

That had once

 

Arose

 

Author's Note

Opinion appreciated! Thanks! :)

Reviews

[Kerri[pollutes]]

i love the rhythm
and it's very encouraging
:]

[morbid]

oh wow idk if you had this on test. but i loooooove it.

This is good. I liked the feel of this. The structure is good it suits what you wrote! Great poem!