heaven

A poem about the people i love but are no longer with us.

Heaven

Looking up at the sky
wondering where heaven is

hoping the ones i love are happy
watching the clouds go bye

thinking about the good times we spent together
longing to see their smile again
wondering if they can see me

do they miss me

i miss them

they are always in my heart
hoping they know how much i love them
wishing i had spent more time with them

praying that god looks after them well

Reviews

[Aethereal]

Beautiful poem expressing an intuition that we all have that everything is eternally entangled and so well balanced to such an extent that the removal of anything would cause all to collapse. When a stone rises to a height, it leaves a potential behind that enables it to return back to Earth. Nothing goes away without leaving behind a potential for its return. The mood of love is somewhat like gravity.

[Lisa Bland]

Thank you Aethereal