haunted house

haunted house

A Story by Lisa Bland
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A breif ghost story.

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Maria was a beautiful tall 18 year old woman with long blonde hair and deep blue eyes. Maria was moving into her new home which was over three hundread years old. It was a old house made out of large stones and limestone. It had moss growing up the sides and was a very large two bedroom house.
Johnathon a large short man who was Maria's best friend had advised maria not to move in to the home as their were rumars about people who lived in the house dieing horrific deaths due to it been haunted by a angry evil spirit.
Maria laughed off Johnathons worries and told him that their was no such thing as ghosts.

the first night Maria was unpacking and thought their was someone coming up the stairs, she went to check as johnathon was worried about her and thought that maybe he had come to check up on her. Deciding to check if someone had come in she went to the stair case.
Seeing that their was no one their she turned around and went back in the bedroom when she heard the footsteps again.
Suprised she span around on the spot their was no one their.
Annoyed Maria shouted Johnathon if that you playing tricks on me it is not funny and your not going to scare me.
Taking a deep breath she went back into the bedroom she then felt a cold chill fill the room. Taking a deep breath she carried on unpacking mumbling to herself that there was no such thing as ghosts.
Suddenly Maria heard someone breathing heavily in her ear and a hand grab her shoulder. Screaming in fear she went to run but the door slammed shut and she couldn't open it. Desperatley trying to open the door Maria begged that the spirit leave her alone.
A loud evil male laugh filled tbe room followed by a booming voice telling Maria that she was his now and that she will never leave the place alive because she is destined to spend eternity with him and the others.
The room suddenly filled with a whaling noise and a load of screaming faces appeared through the walls.
Screaming she ran to the bed grabed a large rock that she had from a trip to the beach and thought was beautiful.
Then dashing to the window she threw the brick at it.
Unfortunitley the brick just bounced off.
Maria heard the laughing again as the rock lifted into the air and was thrown at her.
Manging to duck she dived under the bed. Suddenley the spirit grabbed her leg and started pulling her out from under the bed she clawed at the carpet with no sucess. All of a sudden the voice demanded his seervents obay him and Maria was pinned to tbe floor by the other spirits un able to move. Screaming while trying to wriggle out of the spirits grib as the rock was lifted in the air again the rock suddenley smashed down on her head repeatedly.
The next day Johnathon went to check on her when he found her mangled bloody body in the bedroom.

© 2014 Lisa Bland


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not bad, you have a good frame work. need to flesh it out a bit. and how did the rock become a brick? all in all good read.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lisa Bland

10 Years Ago

Thank you. Must of got a bit muddled when writting.
This was interesting, I was in the story as watching a horror movie...You are good story teller my friend. Will come back to read more of your work.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lisa Bland

10 Years Ago

Thank u glad u liked it

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Lisa Bland
Lisa Bland

norwich, norfolk, United Kingdom



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Hi im new to poetry and wanted to share what ive written and hope its good more..

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