pit of dispair

A poem about depression

Pit of dispair


Feeling sad asthough the world around me is passing by
happy smiling faces everywhere
i feel asthough im falling into a pit of darkness and dispair
desperatley tring to i but i cant climb out
clawing at the walls trying to climb out but constantly falling back down everyone watching laughing happy with my missery i sit pondering if i will ever escape this pit of dispair

Reviews

[fleamailman]

("...nice poem you have much talent..." went the goblin hoping not to intrude seeing that this wasn't posted on the forum but wishing to show his support)

[Lisa Bland]

Thank you fleamailman

[fleamailman]

("...think no more of it human, if that's what you are, btw how does one know if someone has read one's works, I mean is there some sort of hitcounter to help one or is everyone posting blind here..." inquired the goblin who had a bad habit of feeding the spambots in the forum, saying "...naah, they're company rather like one's pets I suppose, but what choice do we have I mean anyone turning up here is going to go the forum first, so if we ever want to build up the readerbase, I guess that is where one has to post then...", and with that the goblin wished well and returned to the forum whence he had come from)

[Lisa Bland]

You get an email if they leave u a review and at the side theirs a stats report that tell you how many views youve had ect

[fleamailman]

("...thanks..." went the goblin suspecting that that wouldn't be much use to the forum where he was though, then adding "...not to mind, so where's your next poem then, have you thought of adding a picture too, I mean might as well get an eye for pictures by matching them there...", and with the looked up form the screen to quickly glance across the bistro to see if anyone has died of bordom yet, and then returned his gaze to the slot in evident disappointment, sighing "...yes, dailylife does drag on somewhat doesn't it, just never a good daydream when one wants one now, say what I'll share yours instead, so what do you daydream about then...")

[Lisa Bland]

I wouldn't know where too look for the right kind of pictures to match the poems ive written. Ive wriiten a few poems but not put them in the forum. If you click on my name i think a list of my poems ect pops up. I day dream about anything that takes me away from reality, What about u

[fleamailman]

("...google image search and no one knows which picture will match your poem until you yourself find it, and then no other picture will do..." mentioned the goblin who had now posted a poem in that poetry section then, adding "...truth is that if someone is looking for poetry they are not going to find yours if you hide yourself away in some subsection somewhere, so no, we must go where those readers will turn up first to entice them towards us still...", ah yes, the goblin was an old hand at corrupting humans, adding "...we must go to them then, so join me if you will...")