love waits forever but sometimes it cant...

Love is a forever thing you only feel it once in your

life it came to me when I met you I wrote your name in

my heart I even made abstract art about the feeling inside

me I will wait untill you notices me ill wait until you expect

my love..I wait..

ive wait all my life for you where have you been

I was there when you got married, there when you had

kids, there when you needed someone to save you from

the world and bring you back to ower childhood fantasy...

im waiting till you love me like that day in the rain..

as I breath my last breath I wonder where are you?

ive waited so long and ill wait forever but....this time

I cant as im leaving this world I say this a final time

I love you...goodbye

Reviews

[SheriH]

I know im sorry about that I was in a emotional stage
when I wrote this so yea it was slopy I'll try to make it
clean next time ps thanks for the review

[Luke L]

Awesome writing, but just pick an idea don't flip flop... does love last forever or not? pick one