Envy's Plot

I find the rhymes corny, but i posted it anyway.

The truth amidst all thunders,

Clouds burst in my surrender,

Defeat behind bars shall never be,

I’ll end this hiding killing spree.

 

Wind walker’s reign is over,

Trapping disguise, discourse’ mend;

Shadows fall with darkness blend,

Sealed-fate actions conscious gain.

 

Hate non-real ‘cept Envy’s plot,

Lightning chains as aftermath,

Unseen yet veils tomorrow’s eyes,

Beneath the clothe is not goodbye.

 

Pale face as I may be,

Unfelt: my shameful art you’ll see,

I’ll paint my presence in color blinds,

To cheat the eyes of crit’cal lies.

 

Hands forbid the clock of sound,

But time provides the boundless bounds,

Blood will burst on nothing’s hum,

My nature is behind the strum.

 

Lock the ties, is it my plan?

The world may hate me for such mind.

But Envy’s plot will mark the crown,

And furnish laugh on Joker’s frown.

Reviews

[Charles D. Moorer]

you have a lot going in this poem. I am not sure I understand it. But there are some worthly lines in the poem.