Raped

This is more of a rap than a poem but they didn't have that option in there.

Angels wouldn't take ya
Hell couldn't have ya
Now your stuck on this hell on earth
Sittin their ponderin your worth
Cause doctors didn't want to take ya cause you didn't have no medical
The cruelty of society is incredible
Now your family's got to go through all this s**t
Their hearts been turned into a bottomless pit
All these thoughts runnin through your head
Hopin
Wishin
Prayin
God took revenge and whoever did this was dead
Your family's wishin he'd done it to them instead
I see you their tryin to pick up the pieces of your life
Hopin someday you'll make a good wife
He didn't take your life but he took your ability to make life
You moved on but you will always remember
Wishin you could take the pain and return it to sender

Author's Note

It's a rap so don't comment on my spelling

Reviews

[A, Amos]

I enjoy the feel of your writing, strong title and I neatly crafted.

[Coyote Poetry]

This is some good writing. Roll perfect. Would be fun to read a loud. A sad story in the words. A life trying to reach for a purpose. Deeds done to harm leave scars forever. Ending had some hope. A powerful poem.
Coyote