Poison

Poison

A Poem by Kate
"

of hypocrites and thieves

"

she sings of
traitors,

murderers

and thieves

she sings of

liars,

of unforgivable

deeds

she sings of

poison,

and of slow

painful death

"be careful,"
I warn her
"you sing

of yourself."

© 2012 Kate


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A great shock for the hypocrite singer,but a soothing comfort for the honest people.
Lovely write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Alm
:O ghasp. That was an amazing dramatic end to a wonderful pem. I thought of a gypsy for some odd reason. Methinks the flow was very nice. I love the lines that go, "of unforgivable deeds." Assonance is wonderful and constant. :D


-Alm

Posted 12 Years Ago


Kate

12 Years Ago

thank you, Alyssa! :D
Alm

12 Years Ago

:)
Such a wonderfully written poem. I love it. Im putting it into my library;)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Kate

12 Years Ago

I'm glad. :D haha, thank you! :)
Very superb poem! You are definitely talented at it. Original structure that put strenth to it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Kate

12 Years Ago

thank you very much! :D

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fourteen. hello, I am an awkward neat freak. I like words, food, and good music. I breathe poetry and vintage photography. I love playing the guitar and I love white roses. I like teal. :) more..

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