Sonnet of Celestial Elegance

English 12.

With the most beautiful eyes I've ever seen,
And lips beyond compare in their softness,
Her skin is fair with an ethereal sheen.
One feels her laugh as a mindful caress,
A voice to match, silvery and surreal.
Her face is cherubic, cheeks are just right.
Looks of innocence, a means to conceal,
An intellect and lover of the night.
Her curves are perfect, yet she's still slender.
Holding the subtle beauty of angels,
A gift of supernatural splendor.
When in compare to models, they are mangled,
In this love names are meaningless, not needed,
Love eternal, never to be superceded.

Reviews

[Charles Petrie]

I like.

What would make it even better would be an artist's rendering, then we could fully see this angelic beauty for ourselves, with our imperfect eyes.

But even without, a good read, especially with a need to rhyme.