Let Me Add A 'Lil Fuel To Your Fire Baby

pyro moment >:-)

The flames that are your hands

Lick at my skin so deliciously 

The warmth of your hot skin searing 

Right 

Through 

Mine 

Is maddening. 

 Let me be your fuel

The ether that is my skin 

Will burst you into my own fire 

As our mouths collide 

The arsenic in my lips 

And the fire on your tongue 

Will bring the city to ruins 

In our own 

Personal 

E X P L O S I O N 

Let me be your accelerant 

The acetone on my fingertips 

Will light a fiery trail 

Right down your body 

As I lightly trace my initials 

Into 

Your 

Skin 

We'll create our own little cocktail 

Of Gasoline 

& 

Kerosene 

And we'll bring the whole world 

To its knees 

And with our burning passion and desire... 

We will set the whole world on fire...

Author's Note

bad.. i know

Reviews

[J.M. Walker]

Wow, This is interesting, because of the many different interpretations it could have. I see meaning on multiple levels and with different purposes. Fire, and fuel as a symbol of passion, and at the same time the literal connotation of fire and fuel is great. The end brings about thoughts of appocolypse. Or the end could mean the intentions that the sexual relationship will be the end of the world for others. I like it!

[Wraith A.K.A. JB]

Perfectly written! The images brought to mind in this poem brought me instantly into your mind set the more deeply I read into this piece. Love and compassion drip deeply into my soul from this. You have a way of writing in this piece that rings of the spontaniousness of love passion. I hope to see much more of your work.

-JB-

P.P.S. Please feel free to view my writing, I would love to know what you think of my work.. Have a great day :-D

[Voltaire Mephisto (aka ..]

Quite a turn on.

[Jason]

Many different words to describe 'fire'. Very emptional piece. Isnt if funny how helpful and useful but how so dangerous the flame can be?

provokes thought, I like it.

Jason

[Legion]

Wow. I like its intensity. No, it is not bad. Burn it up! :) I think you would like my poem "A Passionate Fire". Check it out sometime if you get a chance.

[RAWR!]

i am a sucker for fire,
ever since i was 3 years old and got hold of my first box of matches unsupervised.

its not bad, a little rough perhaps but in no way bad.
bad is when you stop reading and think "i just wasted my life."

what i found funny was this
"The acetone on my fingertips "
i guess only a girl would see that clear connection ^^


thanx for sharing

[she makes me weird]

Great write! I really like the way you used the formatting to add to the intensity of the poem. Awesome visuals as well.

[Astrid Hamilton]

The last two lines are fantastic! It reminds me of a Johnny Cash song that was actually written by the love of his life, and wife, June,but it is your own words with even a greater burning passion.
Falling in love.
Not just the making love.

I'm melting.