Let Me Add A 'Lil Fuel To Your Fire Baby

pyro moment >:-)

The flames that are your hands

Lick at my skin so deliciously 

The warmth of your hot skin searing 

Right 

Through 

Mine 

Is maddening. 

 Let me be your fuel

The ether that is my skin 

Will burst you into my own fire 

As our mouths collide 

The arsenic in my lips 

And the fire on your tongue 

Will bring the city to ruins 

In our own 

Personal 

E X P L O S I O N 

Let me be your accelerant 

The acetone on my fingertips 

Will light a fiery trail 

Right down your body 

As I lightly trace my initials 

Into 

Your 

Skin 

We'll create our own little cocktail 

Of Gasoline 

& 

Kerosene 

And we'll bring the whole world 

To its knees 

And with our burning passion and desire... 

We will set the whole world on fire...

Author's Note

bad.. i know

Reviews

[J.M. Walker]

Wow, This is interesting, because of the many different interpretations it could have. I see meaning on multiple levels and with different purposes. Fire, and fuel as a symbol of passion, and at the same time the literal connotation of fire and fuel is great. The end brings about thoughts of appocolypse. Or the end could mean the intentions that the sexual relationship will be the end of the world for others. I like it!

[Brandon]

Not bad at all, we are our own worst critics. I would describe more as Delicious. Like fire im starving for more, fire's appetite for fuel is never quenched !

[♥ Courtney ♥]

:) thank you :)

[Mike Cole]

It isn't bad there is a lot of good imagery and I like how much emotion that you put into it and your writing style

[Samuel Jack]

Erotic and energetic, I love your poetry! Very modern and hip (not that I'd know what's hip). Enjoyed it, wild ride.

[simplyme]

outstanding...i love the way you used words like gasoline and kerosene

[4$H]

I really hope you review is sarcasm. Or i am bad at rating stuff. BRILLIANT :O

[Eddy Jones]

Wow what a wonderfuly powerful poem;rating high and enjoy your day.
Eddy.

[Rocans]

Excellent, well u set my brain on fire with this read...poetic fiendfyre and lyrical nitroglycerine. Positively entertained. Good job

[Luke L]

Wow that is incredibly hot! (Pun not intended) I can feel the flames licking at my flesh!

[ganga ramesh]

the relation you have given to a fire that is raging and a woman...it is interesting and involving...don't get to think it is bad...:)

[Arsh]

nice....it cool...
make everyone fly...good job.