Hello There Stranger

Hello there stranger 

its nice to meet you

with eyes so bright and

an embrace to greet you

Hello there stranger

stay and chat awhile

come explain to me 

where you got your smile

Hello there stranger

do you hear me calling?

Wont you catch my hand

and keep me from falling?

Hello there stranger

come be with me

hold me close

and set me free

Hello there stranger.. 

Reviews

[Dayran]

You ought to write songs ... your write has that breezy memory of the girl next door ... and yet it delves deep with two feet into feelings of love and longing. Really! ...

[Brandon]

Lol I feel like you just gave me a hug, it is like this poem stretched its lines out and wrapped themselves around me:)

[♥ Courtney ♥]

Im really glad you enjoyed it :)

[Samuel Jack]

This is really cool, you seem like a very forward women, who would just walk up to a guy and make him stumble and stutter. Girl power!

P.S are you really from Raccoon city out of Resident evil!? Lol I know it's not the same place, but it's still awesome :)

[♥ Courtney ♥]

Lol indeed I was referring to the Resident Evil city :)

[TheDuchessDiary]

I find this cute. It reminds me of people who meet and fall in love online. *Thumbs up!"

[no sun]

so if I were to catch your hand would I still be a stranger? this is a wonderful write that shows the good parts of hoping for love.

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice flow of thoughts and I like the desire of the poem. We are strangers just for a short time. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[White Ink]

Adorable :)

[Stanley Wilson]

cute poem really good

[caesarkreshen]

very cute. Makes me smile.

[J.M. Walker]

;)

This has great rhythm. The pattern gives it a good pace. I wonder how long it took you to write this. The reason I ask is because its great and i wonder what the inspriration is!

I like this part : with eyes so bright

[♥ Courtney ♥]

Thank you, it really just came to me. I didn't put much thought into it at all which is why its strikingly mediocre.