The Girl With The Famous Thighs?

My heart is playing games with the rest of my body, and it's dancing and spinning and mostly skipping. Who am i-wellwebothdon'tknow. I walk outside, in the south, during summer, only to the mailbox. But I'm freezing and tired by the time I get back inside, cold and tired. This is wrong, what is wrong? Is it my body that's wrong or how I am feeling? Sometimes, I have to ask others, all the people around me, if they're cold. Just because I don't know wheather or not I should be. Because I'm always so freezing and I wonder if it is just me.

But I'm crashing, mostly into him, like a gasoline fire. Like my beautiful angelwoman, she isn't my angel woman.[I want to be your crystal baller.] And when I step near the curbside or the street I almost always die, because I never make sense or pay attention. I need to know if you would save me. Would you save me? Save me. ME?

I wonder why I play this dance. To see how many secrets I can gracefully spill? To give, forever throughhealthandsickness? I'm always sick.

School is so hard, now that I'm going to evening school instead. The people that go there are so damn crude and sickening. They are stuck in one place, and confortable to go up in flames. And in Algebra, there are three boys that sit behind me. They talk the whole time, and mostly about people. About a girl. I feel like it's about me, because the little swatches of conversation I catch hold up my name. The words are about me.

And the biggest a*****e talking, mostly about me, looks just like him. The f*****g monster who was taller than most and slim, country with dark hair and green eyes. The monster who took without asking and the monster I still subconsiously look for,in everybody.

 

Like a rapist on trial. I swear, I cannot keep seeking you for the rest of my life.I'll go insane.

Reviews

[FuMiko]

I really like this. It has a really nice rhythm and the ending was a really nice catch.
But, right in the center it seemed like it kind of jumped topics. There might be some kind of transition you might be able to think of to put there.
Otherwise, this was a really nice job, and I'm really glad you took the time to write it!

Kudos, and write on!

[EVERYTHINGyoucantelltoS..]

i love.

And the biggest a*****e talking, mostly about me, looks just like him. The f*****g monster who was taller than most and slim, country with dark hair and green eyes. The monster who took without asking and the monster I still subconsiously look for,in everybody.



Like a rapist on trial. I swear, I cannot keep seeking you for the rest of my life.I'll go insane.

i feel this pulsing through me myself. truer words... never. well. no. you just went out and said it.

[EVERYTHINGyoucantelltoS..]

i love.

And the biggest a*****e talking, mostly about me, looks just like him. The f*****g monster who was taller than most and slim, country with dark hair and green eyes. The monster who took without asking and the monster I still subconsiously look for,in everybody.



Like a rapist on trial. I swear, I cannot keep seeking you for the rest of my life.I'll go insane.

i feel this pulsing through me myself. truer words... never. well. no. you just went out and said it.