Firefly......

A Poem by little thoughts

In the gloomy and dark night

It appears giving off light

Making its way in its own glow

And roam around in the night's shadow

In the dark blanket of night it shines

Like the star that twinkle in the dark sky

those little together lit up the world

and manifest a view that has no words

i stand still and just stare

and enjoy the beautiful show in the open air

it will always stay in my mind's eye

those beautiful 'fireflies'

© 2014 little thoughts

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MadalaJose

Beautiful. Fireflies are really beautiful, and you have excellently captured them in this poem. good work

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words.

raj24

again a beautiful picture..nice work :)

Raj

Posted 10 Years Ago

An owl on the moon

I remember my first firefly.. the magic.. and how I love them still.. and your words!

Posted 10 Years Ago

10 Years Ago

thank you for your kind words.

Norah

Very vivid and enchanting..great job :)

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Kurayami

I like this poem. It creates a beautiful scene in my head and it just looks wonderful. Good job!

~Kurayami

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Sophy Freebirds

I could really picture a wide eyed girl staring at the fireflies.. you described the scene so clearly,. Your words have expertly captured the moment.. keep writing ;)

~Sophy

Posted 10 Years Ago

Ashira Macy

I really enjoyed the couplets in this, that type of rhyming has always appealed to me.

In the dark blanket of night it shines
Like the star that twinkle in the dark sky

This was my favorite stanza, I loved the imagery you gave throughout the entire poem.