the bird's desire.......

Oh human! Get me out of this cage

Or else I will die , living in rage

 

When I see my fellow birds fly

The desire of flying arises but then retires with a sigh

 

You have cut my feather

And given me a life of nether

 

Tears fall from my eyes

And my heart bleeds with sorrow

 

Hitherto every day I live with this desire

That one day you will set me free

 

And I will live a life of glee.

 

 

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[raj24]

its really a sweet one...we all want to fly whether its us human or birds..freedom is all we want..loved it :)

Raj

[anne]

good work my friend....:))

[Ashira Macy]

You know why the caged bird sings it would seem. Beautiful work dear. We always strive for freedom.

[little thoughts]

thanks dear !

[Kurayami]

This is a good poem. I like the word choices in this poem. I especially like the first line of the poem. It made me want to continue reading the poem.

~Kurayami

[Sophy Freebirds]

After coming to your page i wanted to read this.. i have a thing for flight. This poem touched me. The desire to fly high.. i liked the strong metaphors..nice write

~Sophy

[yuki]

very nice poem and lots of feeling nice lioness :)

[Norah]

Very nice poem, loved it :)