The rain.

it relate to our life.....

 

Rain comes, sometimes silently

 while sometimes violently

it will suddenly start falling waiting for nothing

it will cause destruction

but when it  will come to an end

it will leave everything new and fresh

then the beautiful rainbow will appear

making everything else disappear

 

our Life is like the rain

troubles will come, sometimes less

while sometimes more distress

it will give a lot of pain

but after a while everything will be normal again

it will make one more strong 

giving him the power to face the world's wrong

it will make him colorful again

just like the rainbow after the rain

 

 

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Gary West]

And here is just one more reason for me to love the rain. Always have enjoyed it, even when it's at its worst, not because of the damage it can cause, but because of how it brings new life. Wonderful comparisons here, in my opinion. Besides, if we never suffered any pain or tragedy, how could we ever truly know joy? Great work here. :)

[little thoughts]

thanks for your kind words

[Kieta!]

This is very beautiful! I love the analogy and the message, and the way the words flow together so nicely. :) This is a perfect one for me to read today because it's raining where I live :D Very nice job with this!!! :)

[little thoughts]

thank you so much for your kind words

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

I like this message, we all go through hard times but there is always good times too. I like how you pointed out that when we go through hard times, it's a chance for us to grow and learn, and when we overcome we will become something beautiful like a rainbow.

Good Job

[little thoughts]

thank you so much for your king words

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

You're welcome