we human beings....

we human beings....

A Poem by little thoughts
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we live but not forever........

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They are to live when they come
a life with lots of runs
some live like angels
other  live like furies
some live in peace
other live in enmity

each go along with their dreams
some get fulfilled while some are left veiled  
sometimes they will arise with hope
sometimes will get scattered like broken pieces of glass
sometimes their heart will dance
sometimes it will be sorrowful like a person who is to die


sometimes they are falling leaves 
sometimes are full bloom flowers
sometimes they are  new born cubs
sometimes they are strong and tough
sometimes they breathe for a cause 
sometimes they will  live for a false

they are born in truth but end up believing in lies
they come , they live, they die
leaving nothing but their memories which 
one day slowly fade like autumn leaves
they live for humanity, they are the humanity
they are the 'humans'
who are one day to die

© 2014 little thoughts


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This is very pretty and so true. We struggle so much throughout our lifetimes, just to die off and have our memories fade over time as well. But we do this because we want to make a difference, and some of us make a huge difference to the word. It is important to aspire. Well done, this was very thought provoking.

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This is a really good poem. Great job!!!!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Fantastic, very meaningful writing.

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Fantastic poem. Great flow and very interesting. Not too many ways to interpret it (an observation, not a critique). Great bit of writing overall.

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very true....the life cycle passing through the rainy and sunny days has to come to an end one day......a pretty poem... :))

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We are all multi-faceted beings. We have happy times and sad times and we learn to deal with them all till the day we die....and we all know that day will come eventually. We can only hope some people will remember us when we are gone. Good write. Lydi**

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very true Lioness, very true.. one day we all will end up being memories.. lost and out.. we are humans not Gods...beautiful written and with such a simplicity that i really enjoyed going through it again and again.. thanks for sharing it :)

Raj

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This is very pretty and so true. We struggle so much throughout our lifetimes, just to die off and have our memories fade over time as well. But we do this because we want to make a difference, and some of us make a huge difference to the word. It is important to aspire. Well done, this was very thought provoking.

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life is a journey to be fulfill into the destiny as it will goes leave a memory from the path that taken

bless

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Yes indeed, the humans are the most invasive, overpopulated and most destructive specious on the planet!

A fine write on the diversity of the human character, foibles and traits !

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