''LIFE GOES ON''

move along with it........

 I sit under the shade of a tree

thinking about the sorrows and grief

then i look at the flying birds and leaves

and think that no matter how hard we try to stop moving

the  'life goes on'

and so should we.

Reviews

[Emily]

Very inspirational, well done :)

[Norah]

What a beautiful point you make in this lovely poem :) Good job!