Set Me Free

One day with the piano

1.

If im sitting down

Looking out the window

Watch the sky turn from very blue to black

I could imagine myself

I could imaging me fly away

Chorus:

Set me free

I don’t wanna be

Anybody else

Let me feel

The freedom in my life

And I see

Someone really cares about me now

They want me to be happy

 

2.

Thoughts may become fast

When life is so doubtful

When others life seem to be the best in the world

Life can be like you think

Like I think: “Oh God! Help me please”

 

C.

I feel I’m free

When I sing to you

From my heart to you

Listen to my song

Coz you’re all that want

Anything wouldn’t be better

 

 

Author's Note

Please comment, and if it sounds weird or strange let me know!

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

A lovely song. Thank you for sharing...:)

[zainul]

Sounds great.
As one year has passed,you may love to reexamine this piece if you should revise it.
Did you want to put 3. after stanza number 1. and 2.?

[MAC]

sounds great...works well in my head. excellent write!

[Leslie Philibert]

Good poem,doesn`t sound strange or weird.Would make a good song if you changed the rhyme scheme.Well done.

[Kim's Poems]

love it, this is awesome. love your lyrics

[NZane]

*sigh* It would be nice to be able to fly away :) Beautiful Linnea ^^

[M.E.Lyle]

I like this, especially the beginning. I could almost picture the sky turning dark and me flying away. Sometimes it seems like other peoples lives are better than ours, but I wouldn't trade for a million others. Nicely written.