"What people want and people see..." A deceptively profound thought, couched in such simple terms. Who among us has not suffered because we failed to adapt to another's preconceptions of how we ought to act or feel, or supplied THEIR needs, to the exclusion of our own? When I look at your photos, and think to myself, "This woman is surely too young and too beautiful ever to have disappointed anyone", I at once realize that I too, am guilty of preconception and stereotyping. We all have our private pains, our hidden burdens, our unpleasant but unsheddable histories, and once I thought of that as a bad thing...But upon reflection, I realized that pain is nearly the only thing that motivates us to learn and grow. So, BRING IT!
An absolute master-stroke of delight, the depth of the soul borne on artistic wavelengths of sincere thought. A song of the self, a plea of revelation, poetry that touches the stars.
So sad and yet so true, "people see only what they want to see"
A beautifully penned piece that comes from deep within. BTW
The third stanza second word (would) should be wish, just a slight
oversight...Overall I was enthralled by this write...
this is exceptional~ it is intimate beyond the tell tale rhyme which is what unfolds the innocence crashing in shards of glass like echoes throughout~ I don't live inside of you~true~ but I know this song well~ only in a slighter variation beating behind my own temple~
This deceptively simple poem deals w/profound issues of inner experiences and outer perceptions. I'll "cheat" by noting that no sign in emphasis suffers misunderstanding as much as Pisces. The eventual grace of the suffering is about learning the alignment to contemplative transcendence over struggling w/the slings and arrows. Because people are mostly very half-baked developmentally, they are not going to see the inner truth without help, so of course the sufferer will only find relief in contemplation -- or really noticing when another person DOES have an extra spiritual intelligence resource to offer.
Contrasting what Spirit wants and what Spirit sees w/people emphasis may help w/the healing.
It is strange to be both the suffering figure and the healing Ground, but in fact that is our depth existential situation. Compassion for oneself and others is ultimately sustained by such insight.
Your poem is a touching delineation of the amplified psychic suffering of the figure in a realm of half-baked humanoids (bless us ;-). Likewise amplifying the intuition of a priori Spirit and allowing that to tip the scales is the beginning of real understanding from which forgiveness flows as naturally as the waters of a mountain stream over enigmatic stones.
Please just know that your graceful and eloquent lines of root confessional sorrow are understood by both a fellow struggling human and loving Spirit source.
Misjudging people goes many ways... just as the less attractive get overlooked because of appearance, those who are attractive can be misunderstood too... never given credit, singer can be thought of as getting contracts because of their looks and accused of lip-synching... just as poor are looked down upon the rich are always thought of as greedy... too often we look but never see. Open the book to a soul before you decide who you like. Anyways I love this poem, very insightful and thought provoking.
Poetry has been my passion since I was about fifteen years old, and I love the structure of rhyme and meter moreso than just randomly throwing words upon a page without any form whatsoever.
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