In This Moment, Forever

Languished, we lay with one another
in night-sweet passion like lovers do-
nefarious night to never ebb.
Drinking delight in the heart of love,
as one, in acrostic, forever.
Mist moves magic, shrouding our secret;
and wisps of wind move over the plain.
Rejoicing in this sacred serai,
illuminated raptured rebec,
Euterpe falls to salacious stitch.
Vervains of white and deep indigo
are gleaming, unreal and phantasmal -
nocturnal nebula on the sea.
This is a moment of joy and bliss,
and sweet kisses that I can't resist.
Silence has a golden aria.
Someone scatters stars across the sky.
Even the moon moves over the hill.
Languidly laying like lovers do,
love lives in this moment, forever.

Reviews

[emmajoy]

A beautifully created acrostic - in a style that could only be yours because, it IS yours. There are phrases here that positively heat thought to cinders, 'Rejoicing in this sacred serai, ~ illuminated raptured rebec, ~ Euterpe falls to salacious stitch.'
More of you, and more of your wordifying, please - and soon.

[Dream Weaver]

A quixotic taste of poignant pulsation.
Such a superbly written venture…

[Robin]

the movement of this piece is a sensual choreography illuminated by your exquisite vocabulary ~ a captivating ending

[Steve]

So sweet! Love it.

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The wondrously exotic-forever emotional incense
so surrealistically expressed. A captivating write!

[Molafvt]

Ahh, ain't love grand? I have fond memories of what you so lavishly alliterate in this passionate tome. These moments do indeed live forever. Short of Altimeters, they will gracefully carry me right through the pearly gates, or elsewhere..... This first stanza is bliss and I learned a new word. I can only ask what the word may have been which they spelled together, as a whole....Could it have been "Love"?

Languished, we lay with one another
in night-sweet passion like lovers do-
nefarious night to never ebb.
Drinking delight in the heart of love,
as one, in "acrostic", forever.

Thanks Linda Marie. You re-kindle some very powerful energies here, as usual...!

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is amazing. I like the beautiful language and story in your words. When the love is good. The night will keep the secret of a deep happiness and passion filled nights. I like the ending to your outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Dinesh Sairam]

Tempting words used in perfect blend. But I'm not comfortable with the 'Love lives this moment' and 'forever' connection. Anyways, a nice poem :)

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

lustrous~ beautiful silken threads sewn in exquisite emotives~