agreed that beauty and sadness can be found in the same place, person, or time, and of course the two are found separate from each other (more?) often. I confess limited knowledge about Marilyn but wonder if it's not a detraction from the "beauty" of your work.
"Like a star that falls to the earth,
there is a beauty to sadness."
A beautiful image in itself that allows the reader to form their own analogies to the concept your presenting. A line from one of my favorite songs I offer for an example, (There's something liberating death alone brings - There's something funny about a lot of sad things) I enjoyed the read and felt it is a very moving piece. I do realize your piece is a tribute to someone your appreciate and with whom you sympathize. Please forgive if I am over stepping my place. Thanks for the post -carl
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1 Year Ago
No worries. As expressed to someone earlier, this poem is not about Marilyn Monroe. It is about th.. read moreNo worries. As expressed to someone earlier, this poem is not about Marilyn Monroe. It is about the beauty to sadness. The picture that I chose just happens to be of her and portrays the emotion that I want to go with the poem. Thank you for your kind words.
The innocense of Marilyn was real, and like Elvis himself... a phenomenon of
extraordinary and breathless Talent. Your poetry is full of Grace and Wonder.
softly, Pat
What you've written is very true, about there being beauty in sadness, and it's very beautiful the way you've written it, but it's hard to tell from the words alone just what the poem is about. Perhaps the poem would make more sense if you expanded it a bit, so that included more details of exactly who the poem was about and what their story was.
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1 Year Ago
Thank you for your review. This poem is not about Marilyn Monroe specifically. The picture was mer.. read moreThank you for your review. This poem is not about Marilyn Monroe specifically. The picture was merely chosen because it represents the beauty to sadness. It could be about anyone.
Such a sad story wrapped around a beautiful woman, manipulated for greed and used for power but in the end, tossed aside when she was deemed no longer useful. The entire theme of her professional existence is sad because it doesn't seem she was ever able to find any happiness. Though I do not know that for a fact and hope that she was able to experience some joy in her life. Your poem your tribute to her is yet another example of your beautiful talent in poetry. One can feel the emotions pouring from your work and it seems obvious this was written from the heart. Wonderfully done my friend.
A amazing video and beautiful words for dear Marilyn. She had the look of innocence and sweetness. She left our world too song. Thank you dear Linda for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote
Beautiful tribute to MM. Penned perfectly and your posted image of her shows her sadness and haunting beauty. A lovely piece Linda. A tragic loss .
Chris
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1 Year Ago
Thank you, Chris. She was a beautiful tragedy.
1 Year Ago
Your posted image of her is perfect. Of all the hundreds of thousands of photographs taken of her, t.. read moreYour posted image of her is perfect. Of all the hundreds of thousands of photographs taken of her, the one you have chosen, captures her sadness and beauty brilliantly.
Mr. Poe wrote of the beauty of sadness. MM lived it. I think you have told us her story in this one, Linda. From what I know of the story, she never got over the pain of the abandonment she experienced in childhood. Thus the bad marriages and being relegated to the sex symbol category. Her death is still regarded as a "probable suicide." It could be that she just couldn't take it any more.
Poetry has been my passion since I was about fifteen years old, and I love the structure of rhyme and meter moreso than just randomly throwing words upon a page without any form whatsoever.
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