“Be like a tree, and let the dead leaves drop.” ~ Rumi
I dream I fall into oblivion in a shower of wings, blooms, and ashes, floating in depths of blue meridian blue as the inkwells beneath my lashes. I am weightless in a glittering swirl of visions in time that mark the ages and let loose the hand of that little girl who wrapped herself in handwritten pages. I surrender to a different sky. My heart is bursting into beams of light and shatters each myth, each untruth, and lie until my spine is uplifted in flight. I sever the cords of conflict and strife stepping into the after of my life.
What I read here is a personal journey, transitions from falling to floating and floating to flying. Perhaps it's mindset, maybe heart-set. It's a poetic description of self-actualization, the peak of self-acceptance, believing whatever happens in life (or the end of it) will be accepted with grace and dignity. A remarkable poem, made even better with the artwork and music. Another truly enjoyable experience.
Posted 5 Years Ago
5 Years Ago
Thank you, R. E. Ray. I like how you * read * me. :-)
I'm never really spiritual, but the words and music take you on a beautiful journey.
Life and death, so interwoven you never realise the journey is your own.
Posted 5 Years Ago
5 Years Ago
Thank you, Paul. It's a journey that we all share.
from birth to death...we write from those inkwells...from that child that grows into an adult, then ages till it's time to step into the after of our life...this depicts how the pen grows with us...the writing is folly at first but then matures into love, then pain, then dreams then rebirth of words.
beautiful,
j.
Posted 5 Years Ago
5 Years Ago
As always, thank you, Jacob. I always appreciate your reviews.
This "feels" like a 2 A.M. poem ...tastes of intentions.
Posted 5 Years Ago
5 Years Ago
Thanks, Chris. It's always so nice to see you. It is now 12:44 a.m. here on the east coast, but I'.. read moreThanks, Chris. It's always so nice to see you. It is now 12:44 a.m. here on the east coast, but I'm not too far behind you.
Poetry has been my passion since I was about fifteen years old, and I love the structure of rhyme and meter moreso than just randomly throwing words upon a page without any form whatsoever.
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