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Compartment 114
Compartment 114
Blood Under The Bridge

Blood Under The Bridge

A Poem by Linda Marie Van Tassell

 

I had never been to the country before,

had never visited the wild in the wood;

but one foggy eve, with the dew on my sleeve,

I arose with the conviction that I should.

The night air was as cold as a witch’s tit,

and the moon had narrowed into a cat’s eye.

I didn’t care, as branches caught in my hair,

like knotty fingers reaching out of the sky.

 

The grass was slippery-smooth beneath my feet.

I had to be careful crossing over hill;

but I just had to get there, somehow, somewhere,

where something beckoned to me, silent and still.

I knew there was something but didn’t know what,

like a note hidden in the back of a book.

I just had to get it, could not forget it,

and I was determined to get me a look.

 

I walked through an alcove of alder and ash.

The catkins lengthened for each conical maid;

and I swore in that moment to end the torment

by trudging onward to that beckoning glade.

The wind it whispered with a wistful woo,

and the shivers clambered like vines up my back.

I felt too small to resist the ghostly call

that lured me onward around the verdant track.

 

Beyond the clearing, I saw an old stone bridge

arching its back across the River de Rayne;

and in that place, I saw the loveliest face,

whose beauty hovers in the back of my brain.

She was dressed in swirls of the gathering mist,

like a nightgown that she might claim as her own;

and her delicate skin, like fine porcelain,

stretched like velvet across alabaster bone.

 

Her hair cascaded from a waterfall braid,

like the fall of night through the trees overhead;

and when she turned to see, looking right at me,

I wanted to run but was rooted instead.

For, her eyes were as vast as the universe;

and her demure smile had the wickedest curl.

I cannot bear the memory of that stare,

that shot from the eyes of that poor murdered girl!

 

When she looked at me, there were stones in her mouth

crushing her voice beneath the weight of the years;

but I was spun back in time, like a spinning dime,

in the long strand of her tumultuous tears.

A storm of leaves was rustling in her hair.

The clouds were caliginous in heaven’s bed.

Her dress was too thin, the rain soaked through to skin;

and she ran through the shadows that draped her head.

 

She was midway across the old stony bridge

when something strange made her stop dead in her tracks.

From within her eyes, I saw two creatures rise,

with iridescent wings upon their gnarled backs.

They pounced upon her with their razor-sharp claws,

slicing through her skin as though an onion peel;

and with a final breath, she fell to her death

in the River de Rayne, which glistened like steel.

 

That unblinking eye in the sky saw it all.

She lay there broken among the jagged stones.

Her hair broke in waves over watery graves

that stilled the shiver that clattered in her bones.

She looked at me, and I grew pale as the moon.

The world seemed lonelier than it was before.

Both love and despair were braided in my hair

as the River de Rayne lapped against the shore.

© 2021 Linda Marie Van Tassell


Author's Note

Linda Marie Van Tassell
For the reincarnated Poe


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Very mysterious, and dark, but beautiful all the while. As a fan of Poe, myself, I feel you have encapsulated his essence very well. Bravo!

Posted 11 Years Ago


A beautiful piece...well done.

Scott

Posted 11 Years Ago


I love this! This is as clever as it is beautiful, and an oddly fun read for me considering the subject matter.

Posted 11 Years Ago


excellent style especially..."
She was midway across the old stony bridge

when something strange made her stop dead in her tracks.

From within her eyes, I saw two creatures rise,

with iridescent wings upon their gnarled backs.

They pounced upon her with their razor-sharp claws,

slicing through her skin as though an onion peel;

and with a final breath, she fell to her death

in the River de Rayne, which glistened like steel.



That unblinking eye in the sky saw it all.

She lay there broken among the jagged stones.

Her hair broke in waves over watery graves

that stilled the shiver that clattered in her bones.

She looked at me, and I grew pale as the moon.

The world seemed lonelier than it was before.

Both love and despair were braided in my hair

as the River de Rayne lapped against the shore."
quite wonderful in description and flow...LAury


Posted 11 Years Ago


Oh, very good, I like Poe, I wondered why this style as I read it, you capture his essence well. Nice descriptive style for the exercise/poem:
"I didn’t care, as branches caught in my hair, like knotty fingers reaching out of the sky.", "I cannot bear the memory of that stare, that shot from the eyes of that poor murdered girl!", "Both love and despair were braided in my hair, as the River de Rayne lapped against the shore."

A sad yet musical poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Daniel Sala

11 Years Ago

Hi, Linda, ohh, okay, I'll have a read of his work, your recommendation must be worthwhile.
Daniel Sala

11 Years Ago

I'm only one and a half poems into this gentleman but I see what you mean, tremendous, thanks for th.. read more
Linda Marie Van Tassell

11 Years Ago

You're welcome.
Vividly cinematic goth rendering. Well worthy of Poe's dark reflections. Haunting, lingers in the mood-mind's eye. . .

Posted 11 Years Ago


An awesome journey and marvelous use of language and imagery.

loved the part -
The night air was as cold as a witch’s tit,

and the moon had narrowed into a cat’s eye.

I didn’t care, as branches caught in my hair,

like knotty fingers reaching out of the sky.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Anand Sehgal

11 Years Ago

Both love and despair were braided in my hair

as the River de Rayne lapped against the .. read more
The only word I can think of to describe this is "Haunting."

Just as a spider carefully crafts her web to ensnare, this poem ensnares the reader into the world of this elegant Gothic poem.

Masterfully done!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


This was totally chilling. I was unfamiliar with the meter but now reading below I realize I've discovered something new. Your descriptions felt Victorian, the dress, the skin the manner of speech and of course the entire piece was effectively Gothic. I think Poe himself would have enjoyed this piece. Well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Well, just as I was about to comment, "A-HA! Another devotee of the Paget metre!", and LOOK WHO YOUR FIRST REVIEWER WAS! When he had his heart attack last year I, too, composed one in that esteemed rhythm...and when I can remember the name of it, I'll send you a link!
I didn't know whether to gasp for breath of quail in fright at this. The overall feeling was that the shade on the bridge was somehow either warning the observer, or blaming her, or perhaps she was blaming herself. The stones in her mouth bit was lovely, as though her persecutor was attempting to stifle some unsavory truths she was about to utter. In fact, it was ALL lovely, very Victorio-Gothic, which is among my favorite styles to read--though I have written few if any (must see about that!)

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/mark090854/1038374/?&p=3

Posted 11 Years Ago


Linda Marie Van Tassell

11 Years Ago

Thanks for the review, Mark. David is the master at narrative storytelling in my opinion, and your .. read more

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Added on November 19, 2013
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Linda Marie Van Tassell

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Poetry has been my passion since I was about fifteen years old, and I love the structure of rhyme and meter moreso than just randomly throwing words upon a page without any form whatsoever. Whi.. more..

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