Mourning Melody

Mourning Melody

A Poem by Linda Marie Van Tassell
"

The night lived in the tendrils of her hair.

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The night lived in the tendrils of her hair.

Like sea-washed silk, it had a moonlit shine;

and her eyes held a smile within their stare

whose delight was a transport to divine.

 

Her laughter and lace skirted on the wind

and fluttered on wings of a butterfly

whose gentle birth and unfortunate end

tilted a mirror of tears in the sky.

 

She bowed her head for the very last time

as the bullet turned her world to ashes

and struck her down while she was in her prime

as she closed the dark wing of her lashes.

 

The incense of dreams rises through the sky

floating on the brim of diurnal light,

disappears in the distance, lost to the eye,

like an eagle beyond the mountain height.

 

The quiet earth settles into her bones

forever silent, forever to be -

her fragile wings at the mercy of stones

that left us to mourn over Melody.

 

I close my eyes and brush the hair of night

until its shadow slips off of the trees

and falls like a dress with threads of starlight

across the cusp of the earth and the seas.

© 2021 Linda Marie Van Tassell


Author's Note

Linda Marie Van Tassell
October 30, 2009 – 16-year old Melody Ross was shot while leaving Wilson High School’s homecoming football game in Long Beach, California. Her parents survived the Killing Fields of Cambodia. Melody didn’t survive the streets of America.



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I have no words - only misery. Prayers for her on All Souls Day.

Posted 11 Years Ago


That was powerful, sad with touch of remembering memory Thank you for sharing your heart:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Phew this was phenomenal .Well done. What a tribute . I pale in comparison .

Posted 11 Years Ago


A very sad poem. She was a beautiful girl. It is terrible when so many young people are being killed. Her poor parent survived hell and had to relearn great sadness. No greater lost than the death of your child. Thank you for the poem. I will put the poor family in my prayers.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


A very poignant elegy. The same structure as Thomas Gray's masterpiece: "Elegy written in a country churchyard". This solemn write not only mourns the death of an innocent girl, but also makes the reader ponder over the deplorable state that our society has degenerated into. I would say that the structure (abab, iambic pentameter) is well-suited for this twofold purpose and indeed, Gray's elegy too is as philosophical as it is plaintive. You have used it quite effectively here, even though some syllables have the wrong stress....

Coming to the content, I think the opening line is absolutely divine. It made an immensely deep impression. The imagery in the final stanza is sublime and carries the grace of the romantics. Overall, I think it is a grave and enchanting write that immediately makes the reader empathize with the victim, but also makes him think. Well penned! Thank you.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Linda Marie Van Tassell

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the informative and insightful critique. I have never read Thomas Gray nor th.. read more
Augustus

11 Years Ago

Yes, Gray's elegy is extremely lengthy. But I'm sure you'll see what I mean once you read it. Here's.. read more
Linda Marie Van Tassell

11 Years Ago

Bless you. :-)
Another gorgeous poem with a very deep, sorrowful core. I love the way you use silver lining to decorate even the darkest of ideas. And I couldn't agree more with David Scott. This truly is worthy poetry. It's terrible that human lives are wasted like this, but it's beautiful that people, like you, still commemorate those who didn't have a full chance at life. Beautiful poem!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Linda Marie Van Tassell

11 Years Ago

Thank you, Gleb. I have had to search for that silver lining in my own life, having a path set befo.. read more
Gleb Zavlanov

11 Years Ago

That last line in your review comment struck me, just like your poetry!
Linda Marie Van Tassell

11 Years Ago

:-) I smile in gratitude. Thank you.
You penned a fitting tribute.
It is sad to see any life cut down much more so the lives of our children.
Very worthy poetry!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Linda Marie Van Tassell

11 Years Ago

Thank you, David. What's worse is when that child is shot by another child. It's the senseless was.. read more
A beautiful remembrance for a beautiful soul.
Too many guns in too many hands, where and when will it all end???
Perhaps only the dead have truly seen the end of insanity.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Poetry has been my passion since I was about fifteen years old, and I love the structure of rhyme and meter moreso than just randomly throwing words upon a page without any form whatsoever. Whi.. more..

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