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Insane Rage

Writing home
Though I know
You're not alone

Should I tell you
What life is like
My life anyway

Would you read
Do you care
Will you leave me in dispair

Missing you and all you do
Lonely nights
Shivering

Wet with fear
Damp in anger
Dripping with rage

We wait our turn
Hear the sound
So loud it deafens

Panic sets stomach turning
Barbed wire stretched
And yearning

Do you care
Echo's
Through my mind

Noise, heat, biting hard
Legs of jelly
Skin so white

Rain, mud and bloody death
Men in arms hang on the line
Red are the poppies like our blood

AND DO YOU REALLY CARE

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

One of the saddest picture of war. Look at the dis-concern of the walking Soldiers. War make men cold and listless. They must carry the memories in the hidden parts of their minds. Rebirth later. I like the desire of this poem. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Marie Harrison]

Oh this is so sad and maddening
The picture just is the cherry topper to
This poem, giving a sharper perspective
For the intense rage in the poem

[marybeth davis]

touch a place with the pic i love this:)

[deeps]

This is really wonderful, I feel sad when reading this,
you really touched the heart with the poetic piece.
Enjoyed this write.