The song of the seagull
A Poem by
Linear
Sea,Salt and Sand
Seas of ocean blue Waves of a salty hue Swells of highs and lows Memories of life do flow White tipped waves pierce sand Wash clean upon the strand A lone walrus bellows it's cry Needs the maid to sing a lullaby Myriads of stars gleam in the night Sparkling light in the afterglow Dreams they float On ebb tide Waters trickle from these sad eyes In the distance the seagulls song is never heard Blending into the oceans Foamy spray
© 2011 Linear
Author's Note
It's anything that you want it to be :O)
Reviews
Another excellent write that shows beauty and mingles with saddness!
Posted 13 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
There is a haunting beauty flowing through your words... how it sings in melancholy echoes. I so miss the sea, and this wondrous work is an enchantment for me.
Posted 13 Years Ago
There is a haunting beauty flowing through your words... how it sings in melancholy echoes. I so miss the sea, and this wondrous work is an enchantment for me.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I like the artwork and the amazing poem. The sea is powerful and dangerous. I like the description. Took me to my favorite place with this excellent poem.
Coyote
Posted 13 Years Ago
I like the artwork and the amazing poem. The sea is powerful and dangerous. I like the description. Took me to my favorite place with this excellent poem.
Coyote
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
This is sad but beautiful imagery. There is a feeling of loss and being overcome in this poem.
Posted 13 Years Ago
This is sad but beautiful imagery. There is a feeling of loss and being overcome in this poem.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
as always you captured the imagination of the reader..and with the pic it just finishes off the whole write. excellent.
Posted 13 Years Ago
as always you captured the imagination of the reader..and with the pic it just finishes off the whole write. excellent.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
This was both sad and beautiful. I really liked the picture. Wonderful write.
♥ Ta'Shandra
Posted 13 Years Ago
This was both sad and beautiful. I really liked the picture. Wonderful write.
♥ Ta'Shandra
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
A lone walrus bellows it's cry
Needs the maid to sing a lullaby
I love the walrus, they are so cute! Beautiful sea poem. :)
Posted 13 Years Ago
A lone walrus bellows it's cry
Needs the maid to sing a lullaby
I love the walrus, they are so cute! Beautiful sea poem. :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I am glad that it wasn't about seagulls to much..as I don't really like them!! solid rhyme and meter...love the picture really adds to the poem
Posted 13 Years Ago
I am glad that it wasn't about seagulls to much..as I don't really like them!! solid rhyme and meter...love the picture really adds to the poem
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
i don't normally approve of rhyme, but you use it in the best way
Posted 13 Years Ago
i don't normally approve of rhyme, but you use it in the best way
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Linear United Kingdom
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