Digging in

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Finger nails bleeding as you try to dig in
No way of knowing if it's time to give in

You wrestle you fight
You know that it's right

The aim of this project is to win at all costs
Never feel sorry for those who have lost

Dont give an inch, take all you can
Spit in their eyes when they plead
Dont feel pity, now that you dont need

Climb to the top
Dont ever stop
Suffer the pain to feel the gain

Scream out as loud as any man can
I dont give a toss, as long as it's your loss

My selfish desire to reach the top
It's only what you taught me
So dont look so shocked

Author's Note

done in a hurry, but im not sorry :op

Reviews

[Dewella~Vintella]

Even though it was done in a rush as you said I still think it was as great piece; And as I read, it did not feel rushed at all. The emotional impact was good, and well as the imagery and flow that came along with your word use.

All in all a great piece.

Vin~

[Joiedevivre]

hmm.. made me think. I know this kind of hardening in myself but it goes against all of my instincts. Great job at capturing that duality without too much ado.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

I wouldn't be sorry either! This was written with deep emotion and vivid imagery!

[deeps]

This is so emotional. I can feel this write.
Amazing imagery as well.

[Day Dreamer]

Well written. Keep writing! :)

[prodicallife]

beautifull piece...quite inspiring
Good work

Appericiation

Regards
PRODICAL

[dora]

Done in a hurry, but awesome, therefore you don't have to be sorry

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

those last four lines drive the arrow home and true~ we reap what we sow~ how do you teach care and compassion to young ones to carry into adulthood in a world of competitive thrills and kills~

[Marie Harrison]

What a scrapper!
Full of perserverance and angst.
One-up, one-down polarized relationship,
Getting to the top, at whatever cost
Determined!