Digging in

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Finger nails bleeding as you try to dig in
No way of knowing if it's time to give in

You wrestle you fight
You know that it's right

The aim of this project is to win at all costs
Never feel sorry for those who have lost

Dont give an inch, take all you can
Spit in their eyes when they plead
Dont feel pity, now that you dont need

Climb to the top
Dont ever stop
Suffer the pain to feel the gain

Scream out as loud as any man can
I dont give a toss, as long as it's your loss

My selfish desire to reach the top
It's only what you taught me
So dont look so shocked

Author's Note

done in a hurry, but im not sorry :op

Reviews

[Dewella~Vintella]

Even though it was done in a rush as you said I still think it was as great piece; And as I read, it did not feel rushed at all. The emotional impact was good, and well as the imagery and flow that came along with your word use.

All in all a great piece.

Vin~

[Poe Redd]

Sorry for taking so long, I'm only now getting to my neglected read requests. I love this one so much! It gripped me and i felt powerfull reading it.

[Coyote Poetry]

In a world where the strong are in control. The poem tell a real story of life and goals. A powerful poem with a real story. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Art Sun]

Success can be reached in two ways...trampling on others or just striving with passion and desire...your poetic expression gives us a view that many use and or feel as they reach for the top...

[xjust-for-me.x]

WOW is all i can say....

[Emily B]

reminds me of the fool's prayer . . .

[Moflo]

I like the structure of this piece a lot. I also like how it ends suggesting that the entire desire to win is the product of a cycle we have made as humans, it adds a whole new life to this piece. Nicely done.

[sarah]

The is a great poem!

[Poetic Beauty]

Gotta love those who will do anything to get to the top over what ever they are aiming for. Selfish people who care more about money and fame than humanity. I am glad I am not a materialistic person.

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokhar..]

WOW-nderful write

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LOL...take a look at the people you trample on, on the way up..their the ones who step out of the way, on your way down!