Seduction

Always listen to the advice of those who love without charge

"Hello, wont you sit beside me?"

" No I dont think I should"

" Oh come now what harm could there be, Im quite harmless"
Any one can see

" Mother warned me of thee, now please just let me be"

" Your mother is jealous, she used to know me, she knows you will love me and want to be free"

"Will you be gentle, kind and good to me?"

" Of coures, now please come sit beside me"

" Oh well I surpose it will be fine, just for a little while but do tell me why you look at me so, tell me please what is it you see?"

" I see the best in you, now come sit next to me, or perhaps on my lap is where you would prefer to be"

" Now why is my heart racing inside me? I dont understand what you're asking of me, and why is your hand resting on me?"

"Now little girl, be quiet allow me to address the undressing of you"

"Please dont touch me there, mamma said you must not, oh oh oh Please dont you stop"

"See now how you like it, just like your mother"

"Oh that was so nice wont you do it again, and before I forget wont you please tell me your name?"

" My name is Seduction  And I dont need to do it again!"

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I have three daughters. I tried to teach them common sense and logic. Hard sometime to tell the good people from the bad. Woman and men can be pure evil and we do not know. I like the way you told the story. A mother's words should be listen to. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[sarah]

Oh my goodness lol Well alrighty then

[Dewella~Vintella]

Lol, a very serious, yet comical piece all in one. Very well done, I never could manage to make poetry from dialogue. For that, I envy you. :P

Vinny~

[Marie Harrison]

Very funny poem!
Wonderful write.
Picture is perfect too.

[An owl on the moon]

Your dance of words is both sensual and thought provoking, using the various fonts and colors to stir the notions even more deeply. This drives home a stark message without sounding preachy.