Seduction

Always listen to the advice of those who love without charge

"Hello, wont you sit beside me?"

" No I dont think I should"

" Oh come now what harm could there be, Im quite harmless"
Any one can see

" Mother warned me of thee, now please just let me be"

" Your mother is jealous, she used to know me, she knows you will love me and want to be free"

"Will you be gentle, kind and good to me?"

" Of coures, now please come sit beside me"

" Oh well I surpose it will be fine, just for a little while but do tell me why you look at me so, tell me please what is it you see?"

" I see the best in you, now come sit next to me, or perhaps on my lap is where you would prefer to be"

" Now why is my heart racing inside me? I dont understand what you're asking of me, and why is your hand resting on me?"

"Now little girl, be quiet allow me to address the undressing of you"

"Please dont touch me there, mamma said you must not, oh oh oh Please dont you stop"

"See now how you like it, just like your mother"

"Oh that was so nice wont you do it again, and before I forget wont you please tell me your name?"

" My name is Seduction  And I dont need to do it again!"

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I have three daughters. I tried to teach them common sense and logic. Hard sometime to tell the good people from the bad. Woman and men can be pure evil and we do not know. I like the way you told the story. A mother's words should be listen to. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Enigma]

Intriguing and unique. Well penned.

[Poetic Beauty]

Seduction can be very tempting and over powering of the brain at time but seduction can also be quite beautiful. It depends on the relationship and the the people involved. This is a unique way of telling the story.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

This is an excellent poem that brings a wonderful message! Well done, my friend!

[FaithfullyJennyBear]

kinda creepy but awesome xD x

[SINDE]

Well , this is somehow new. But then a writer needs various routes of expression Thumbs up for that my friend.

[Lindsey]

Well, that was a very powerful piece of writing. Well done.

[?]

This was an amazing piece, brings a wonderful message, although it was a serious but with a little humorous piece, for me anyway.
Love the color scheme, it adds to the poem and the picture fit perfectly.

Wonderfully written, loved it

[dora]

I like the way you make use of dialogue here

[prodicallife]

outstanding..Loved the way you framed the conversation in poetry....

Regards
PRODICAL