Sleepy Time Dreams

A Quick and short poem

In lightening silver streak
Tossed and lost
Inside a tempest deep

There forever my soul to keep
If I could only
Stay asleep

To see your face
And have some peace

Reviews

[xjust-for-me.x]

hmm well I do like it but it is not up to your usual standards hun.....sorry but you did say to be honest when I read your work.

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this is like a mantra of absent lovers before bedding down for the night..lovely expression.

[LA Lorena]

I loved the haunting quality to this work. My only question/criticism would be the choice of font colour. It just seems a little bold and over-bearing for the tender thoughts expressed, IMHO.

[deeps]

Amazing write, I enjoyed this.

[dora]

I love the painting,the poem kinda makes me nostalgic for there are times I sleep so peacefully I never want to wake up.

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful words and a old painting. Always a outstanding combination. Thank you for your excellent poetry and gifts of artwork.
Coyote

[Poetic Beauty]

This is short but filled with deep emotions that go beyond simple love.

[Sukriti Suki]

Short, to the point yet deep. A really liked this.

[Poe Redd]

Wow, who knew such a short poem can convey such stong feelings. It felt so dreamy and hopefull. Love it, for sure!

[Tasha]

This was beautiful and strong, you did a great job.
♥ Ta'Shandra