I thought this was going to be something romantic..but it's a raw and stark look at your relationship with the written word..a clever and poem which draws the reader to look at their own feelings ...ingenious work my friend
Great morose kind of vibe with a very real feel. You hit on some exceptional points when it comes to what feels like the futility of writing. Great work.
I like no love the imagery in this poem. We can write about lost love and new love on paper and the way you describe the art of writing in this poem is creative and unique. I like the details and the word choices.
I liked it very simply expressed, yet it says so much. Even though many writers experience the same thing when it comes to writing the uniqueness is how we express it. I like this expression. Very well done :)
The way you express your words allow the reader to want to see into your thoughts. So many strong statements in this poem.
"Waiting
Stating it's own view
To be raped by my pen
Is nothing new"
A excellent poem. Your words always test my mind.
Coyote
this is possibly one of the most original things I've read on here - "...paper waiting, stating its own view, to be raped by my pen" - violent, yet considering such amazing poetry, beautiful.
Dont worry if the sparrow chirps today,
Tomorrow the Nightingale shall sing
Judge me if you will, not on the words of another who may have their own agenda, but as YOU find me, as YOU .. more..