I like this piece a lot...it really shows the fragility of the world through the poet's mind, how the language of poetry is its own entity that many cannot even comprehend. It is true, everything is poetry, but leave it only to the poets to notice. Good write.
the overwhelming flood of inescapable poetry! vicious and merciless its love and wrath~ you've captured the bondage of the poet and exposed it, well done!
this is a fantastic piece of writing that most of us will be able to relate to from the first stanza on~ really well placed key elements of a poet's mind are opened beautifully~
often I have been known to say that my poetry writes me instead of the other way around~ a bittersweet deal that is~
I like this piece a lot...it really shows the fragility of the world through the poet's mind, how the language of poetry is its own entity that many cannot even comprehend. It is true, everything is poetry, but leave it only to the poets to notice. Good write.
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Everything has a trade off, a blessing to have poetic verse in your mind always ready for a new creation and a curse if it consumes you and takes away from your life. Great write.
I absolutely love this xD
"Blood no longer flows
Through these veins
Just verse and ludicrous rhyme"
This part is especially brilliant :D
For me, this poem is about hating poetry because you see it and think it everywhere, so much so you're practically drowning in it.
Good write (:
Look at me....poetry stops. Problem fixed...lol. Its like the line from Throw Momma Form the Train "a writer writes.....always" can be a curse. Nice job and Happy Sunday!
Dont worry if the sparrow chirps today,
Tomorrow the Nightingale shall sing
Judge me if you will, not on the words of another who may have their own agenda, but as YOU find me, as YOU .. more..