Bathing in the Light of Orali

Shades of Annabell lee, by E.A.Poe--------I may have spelt that wrong.

How many times shall I bend my knee
to the beautiful
Orali

She moves like a shadow in the night
does the beautiful
Orali

When love grows old
I shall live by the light of my wonderful
Orali

She holds me tight
when the arrows bite, does the wonderful
Orali

Now Orali is a woman bold
beautiful through and through
she loves me though I know not why
thats my beautiful
Orali

And I shall bathe in her light
by both day and night.

The light of Orali

Author's Note

This may well be the last poem I write, Maybe. time for me is running short, to all my friends here, i wish you all the very best and thank you for all your sweet words, yours as always Linear

Reviews

[Corinne]

What a beautiful poem. I do hope it isn't the last. Bathe in the beautiful light of Orali.....vivid and picturesque poetry.

[Marie Harrison]

Oh, this can't be your last. Encore, encore.
We want more!

Very beautiful poem. I'm with Imagination, I love your poems too.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

This was like a beautiful song being softly whispered in my ear!

What do you mean your last poem? I love your writing!!!

[Chelsea]

This is such a beautiful poem. For the first few stanzas I was intently trying to figure out what "orali" was but you tell us! I like how you did that, most poets confuse the crap out of me and have me puzzling all day. Orali, curious. Did you mean this as the song "Aura Lee" I forget the composer?!?!
A lovely poem, great flow, beautiful descriptions!
Also why the last poem?

[Lindsey]

I like it it's beautiful but why would this be youre last?

[Poetic Beauty]

This is beautiful and describes a stunning feeling. I truly hope this is not your last poem. I much enjoy your writing and this one feel comforting and soothing.

[Ruth]

Linear, your work is wonderful, as you are, if you leave, I shall be very sad! :( Hugs to you hon xx

[OT]

a great poem here!! even more so as it may be your last!! going out with a bang! best wishes!!!

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this is my favorite poem of yours and now you are leaving..my heart is heavy..I don't know your reasons but you are an excellent writer and will be sorely missed :(