NAMES

A conversation, on a life changing night

"You love her, dont you?"

"Yes I love her, no point in any denial is there"

" Will you care for her, like you said you would care for me?"

"Yes I will care for her"

"What is it about her you love so much?"

"Everything about her is just so perfect, her blue eyes that sparkle lips that I long to kiss "

"Do you love her more than you love me?"

"Now how could that be, It's just different with her, i'm sure you can see"

"I feel a little jealous, I know that she is so very beautiful, I fear she will take you away from me"

"You're being silly, and feeling insecure, you know that I love the both of you, it's plain for all to see"

"You are right of course, how silly of me, for she is our third child how happy we should be"

"Yes my darling, and we both love her so, now think of a name, not just number three."

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

I like the last line of this poem. this poem has deep emotions in it that most people hold back and don't express. Children bring love, laughter and kindness but the emotions that most don't speak about are the anxiety, wondering and being scared. I like how this poem is a conversation. It is creative and well thought out. You have clearly expressed so many emotions going on in this piece.

[Cynthia]

wow, thats a interesting one! I love the ending, its fun! This is a different poem from what you have written at past, but I think thats great!

[OT]

ha quite strange and rather misleading!! but I liked it! it was different! nice

[xjust-for-me.x]

Love the ending..as you read the poem you think of something totally different. Very nice write.

[Hush Hush]

Hahaha that was very misleading but it turned out really sweet. :) congratulations

[Sunny Skye]

Very good. I like it.

Deep emotions.
Full of passion.
A misleading beginning, but a wonderful plot.
Very nice. (:

[luciddreamer]

This was great :)

Peace
Robin

[Poe Redd]

omg, lol. I love this! at first I'm like "what?!" and then in the end I'm like "Aw, that's so sweet!" Nice one!

[An owl on the moon]

What a brilliant twisting, turning dialogue that leads us into the perfect ending. Beautifully voiced, with those hints of sweet, jealous wonder...