Stay far away from me now, dont try to taste these tears for bitter they are.
Dont come close, stay clear from my darkened shadow for only ice winds blow there steer far from my rage, from this anger for where once peace and tranquillity languished, now hatred rules supreme
I gave you love you took it didn't look back as you shook it begged me to come back, and I came, only for you to say that I was to blame.
Go far away from me lest I should perhaps harm thee dont I pray pity me for your sister is being Oh so good to me!
A really thoughtful work...
keeping away from the darker side..
The lines:
I gave you love
you took it
didn't look back as you shook it
begged me to come back, and I came,
only for you to say that I was to blame.
were so touching and realistic that I could easily relate to the feeling contained..
You always hook us with you closing stanzas.. a solid piece, capped off with twisting humor.. BTW... rumor has it, the sister gets around.. cover it up!
LOL.....that last line is hilarious, I was all ready for a morose and bitter ending instead here you are making out with the sister. I wonder what kind of issues that would ultimately cause, talk about family strife!...... Great writing, had a bit of a haunting lilt to it at least up til the end. Loved it.
Dont worry if the sparrow chirps today,
Tomorrow the Nightingale shall sing
Judge me if you will, not on the words of another who may have their own agenda, but as YOU find me, as YOU .. more..