I never left you

Kind of sad poem of a lost but never forgotten love

Do you remember that day when you begged me to stay?
not that I was ever going to leave you
you were so insecure
I never left you.

I remember the very first time I layed eyes on you
your hair was long, and you tried to hide behind it
but your laugh was sweet
your smile lit up the room
I never left you.

We talked
then talked some more, all through so many nights
and our love blossomed
rose up higher than Angels
I never left you.

I remember when we played the violins together
and I was lost in your strings
I wonder if you ever were lost in mine?
from a B Flat to a C Sharp
I was never far from you
and I never left you

But now as I drink my coffee
stare at these bare walls
I wonder where you are tonight
in who's embrace
and do you perhaps ask him, with those same words

"Please dont ever leave me"

I never left you!

Author's Note

This was done on the spur, during the day i thought of a poem, but as usual it slipped away, so i wrote this instead

Reviews

[Magdelena]

Wow! I'm sitting here and am lost for words. Like what would my family think????
Duh! This was so powerful. You have a different way of writing. One I haven't seen before.. I like it! You write with soul, heart, and my Lord, such beautiful music deep with you... I am in awe..

Mags xx

[Coyote Poetry]

Wow. Is my emotion to this poem. You create a paradise with situation of happiness and joy. Promises made can leave us with wishes the words were true. A sad ending to the poem. Last words made the sad poem complete. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[E.H. Monroe]

F**k. This hits the heart like a cattle prod from hell.
I have been here, in the change of the roles. From the charge to the charged. The bare walls and the float into an empty house where the ratfucking shitpile who owns the arms now. It fills me with horrid feelings and waves of memories I wish pulled off shore.

Ironically enough this is chapter 9 of my rantings, just in beautiful poetry and no man rape.

I also like the dual meaning of the B flat and C sharp as "Be Flat and "See sharp" like a "hey watch out assnugget, you're about to get rolled over."

Top notch work

[Crowley]

Bam!!!!!! Great ending, funny how we hold things so close and so tightly. close your eyes and the distance is a football field, and then a continent. Great writing. Loved it.

[Robin]

and as is such of such loves , the notes of a heartsong ~

[Brianna Brie]

This poem is very touching with such a heartbreaking tone. I like what you did with it.

[OT]

this was really good!! the echoes of lover's past! I also really like the allusion to music - the strings, as close as sister notes b flat/c sharp etc!!

[Marie Harrison]

Oh well, I like this one. I especially loved the details of playing the violins together. Lovely. It's a very intimate poem.