Night Calls

Night Calls

A Poem by Linear
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A little dark stuff

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When the night hawk calls
 you awaken from a dreamless sleep
and loneliness screams right at you
then the spectres three stand in judgement on thee

Dragging you from your cosy bed
hoping and praying this is all inside your head
yet with fingers pointing you must do their will
for you stand accused
in a damp and stagnant court of hell

The first one stands
he screams your name
says you are the one to blame

To the rack he shouts
we will know the truth
and then you'll plead and beg

Cobwebs drift across my face
looming from this empty place
tears fall down upon the ground

the second one stands
and laughs out loud
"now lets see you dance" says he

Spectre three with black silk on head
looks a little sad to me
yet in his hand he holds my life
whats the crime?

HE STRANGLED HIS WIFE

 
upon your knees you will come to me or lose your head it's up to me
say your piece or take a bow















It wasn't me, I swear I'm innocent
it was the laughter I couldn't bear

as they all sat
and fell off their chairs

And I realised
the laughter that i heard
was coming from between my lips

Hahahahahahah!

© 2011 Linear


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wow...there's the mother of all dark poems.

Posted 13 Years Ago


The poor crazy b*****d.
He killed her but the demon got him anyway.....

Well written piece.

Posted 13 Years Ago


OMG! lol I didn't expect that hon!
What a ride through the macabre! :) In a good way!
Told with intellect and darkness, awesome
xx


Posted 13 Years Ago


this is rather evil. Insanity is bliss, isn't it?

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow i read this one twice too. Very nice n weird but good.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like this poem. I had to read a second time to catch the twisted tale. I like how the person in the poem was away from the actions of the poem. In the end they realized it was them. A very good ending to a outstanding tale and poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow.. It's amazing how you wrote this. It is really good

Posted 13 Years Ago


deep and creepy work, this sure was dark. you've done well here man! good job with this one!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow. Dark and deep. The ending really got me. Like it! Cool job

Mags xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


Ha! This was a scream! That's a hell of a dream Linear!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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